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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【只】【海】【燕】【正】【在】【飘】【海】【过】【洋】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【像】【另】【一】【颗】【心】【还】【在】【远】【方】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【在】【天】【地】【里】【垂】【直】【滑】【翔】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【直】【到】【再】【也】【回】【不】【去】【故】【乡】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【看】【这】【世】【界】【已】【不】【再】【有】【月】【光】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迷】【路】【的】【人】【在】【林】【子】【里】【彷】【徨】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【愿】【醒】【来】【的】【人】【睡】【得】【安】【详】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【却】【永】【远】【有】【人】【擎】【灯】【把】【黑】【夜】【照】【亮】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【山】【上】【白】【雪】【还】【在】【纷】【纷】【扬】【扬】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【山】【下】【辛】【夷】【花】【的】【微】【笑】【慢】【慢】【凄】【凉】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【两】【个】【世】【界】【没】【有】【窗】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【即】【使】【是】【光】【又】【要】【怎】【么】【闯】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【在】【冰】【冷】【的】【世】【界】【到】【处】【流】【浪】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【有】【途】【径】【的】【田】【野】【满】【是】【创】【伤】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【突】【然】【席】【卷】【而】【来】【对】【前】【方】【的】【失】【望】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【你】【已】【不】【在】【我】【身】【旁】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【只】【海】【燕】【正】【在】【飘】【海】【过】【洋】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【像】【另】【一】【颗】【心】【还】【在】【远】【方】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【在】【天】【地】【里】【垂】【直】【滑】【翔】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【直】【到】【再】【也】【回】【不】【去】【故】【乡】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【看】【这】【世】【界】【已】【不】【再】【有】【月】【光】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迷】【路】【的】【人】【在】【林】【子】【里】【彷】【徨】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【愿】【醒】【来】【的】【人】【睡】【得】【安】【详】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【却】【永】【远】【有】【人】【擎】【灯】【把】【黑】【夜】【照】【亮】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【山】【上】【白】【雪】【还】【在】【纷】【纷】【扬】【扬】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【山】【下】【辛】【夷】【花】【的】【微】【笑】【慢】【慢】【凄】【凉】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【两】【个】【世】【界】【没】【有】【窗】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【即】【使】【是】【光】【又】【要】【怎】【么】【闯】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【在】【冰】【冷】【的】【世】【界】【到】【处】【流】【浪】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【有】【途】【径】【的】【田】【野】【满】【是】【创】【伤】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【突】【然】【席】【卷】【而】【来】【对】【前】【方】【的】【失】【望】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【你】【已】【不】【在】【我】【身】【旁】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】中国青岛市政府采购网【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【生】【:】【高】【考】【后】【三】【个】【月】【的】【假】【期】【里】【可】【以】【做】【些】【什】【么】【有】【意】【义】【的】【事】【情】【啊】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【葵】【花】【籽】【:】【可】【以】【考】【个】【驾】【照】【,】【为】【以】【后】【节】【约】【时】【间】【。】【去】【接】【触】【更】【多】【的】【人】【,】【如】【做】【初】【级】【销】【售】【、】【做】【客】【服】【、】【打】【电】【话】【。】【做】【这】【种】【事】【如】【果】【当】【成】【任】【务】【和】【工】【作】【会】【非】【常】【痛】【苦】【,】【当】【成】【学】【习】【和】【磨】【炼】【会】【很】【有】【帮】【助】【。】【有】【规】【律】【的】【锻】【炼】【,】【每】【周】【不】【少】【于】【3】【次】【的】【有】【氧】【运】【动】【,】【每】【次】【不】【少】【于】【1】【小】【时】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【邓】【亚】【楠】【:】【大】【家】【怎】【么】【看】【高】【考】【作】【文】【啊】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【热】【心】【网】【友】【:】【借】【用】【一】【句】【貌】【似】【风】【马】【牛】【不】【相】【及】【的】【话】【,】【“】【人】【人】【生】【而】【自】【由】【,】【却】【无】【往】【不】【在】【枷】【锁】【之】【中】【”】【,】【没】【有】【边】【界】【,】【不】【经】【思】【考】【的】【自】【由】【不】【是】【自】【由】【。】【同】【样】【,】【没】【有】【命】【题】【的】【作】【文】【如】【同】【没】【有】【界】【限】【的】【自】【由】【。】【文】【章】【本】【来】【就】【很】【主】【观】【,】【如】【果】【再】【省】【略】【主】【题】【,】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【就】【基】【本】【无】【从】【评】【判】【。】【定】【时】【、】【定】【量】【,】【在】【方】【寸】【之】【间】【展】【现】【思】【维】【、】【逻】【辑】【、】【想】【像】【力】【,】【才】【能】【算】【是】【筛】【选】【,】【才】【有】【择】【取】【优】【秀】【的】【可】【能】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【总】【而】【言】【之】【,】【高】【考】【作】【文】【区】【区】【八】【百】【字】【却】【占】【有】【六】【十】【分】【的】【分】【值】【,】【它】【要】【考】【察】【考】【生】【选】【定】【文】【体】【的】【能】【力】【、】【语】【言】【组】【织】【能】【力】【、】【逻】【辑】【推】【理】【能】【力】【、】【由】【题】【及】【材】【的】【材】【料】【组】【装】【能】【力】【。】【最】【重】【要】【的】【,】【是】【普】【遍】【认】【为】【的】【已】【经】【被】【题】【材】【限】【定】【了】【的】【想】【像】【能】【力】【,】【“】【最】【高】【级】【的】【想】【象】【力】【是】【不】【自】【由】【的】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【空】【港】【:】【文】【综】【和】【数】【学】【在】【考】【前】【如】【何】【冲】【刺】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【资】【深】【考】【试】【专】【家】【:】【数】【学】【关】【键】【还】【是】【在】【于】【做】【题】【,】【但】【怎】【么】【做】【呢】【,】【既】【然】【是】【冲】【刺】【阶】【段】【了】【,】【就】【不】【要】【做】【太】【多】【了】【。】【建】【议】【你】【把】【以】【前】【一】【些】【重】【要】【的】【模】【拟】【考】【试】【题】【拿】【出】【来】【,】【仔】【细】【分】【析】【一】【下】【,】【把】【以】【前】【做】【不】【好】【的】【题】【找】【出】【来】【,】【有】【针】【对】【性】【地】【再】【练】【一】【下】【,】【每】【天】【保】【持】【一】【定】【量】【的】【练】【习】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【综】【做】【做】【模】【拟】【题】【是】【有】【必】【要】【的】【,】【主】【要】【是】【感】【受】【考】【试】【的】【那】【种】【节】【奏】【。】【对】【一】【些】【重】【要】【的】【知】【识】【点】【再】【梳】【理】【梳】【理】【,】【结】【合】【已】【经】【考】【过】【的】【试】【题】【看】【看】【出】【题】【的】【逻】【辑】【。】【这】【会】【儿】【基】【本】【上】【处】【在】【一】【个】【疲】【劳】【期】【,】【所】【谓】【行】【百】【里】【者】【半】【九】【十】【,】【这】【会】【儿】【最】【重】【要】【的】【是】【要】【保】【持】【节】【奏】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【考】【前】【一】【周】【要】【做】【的】【事】【情】【,】【最】【主】【要】【的】【是】【把】【错】【题】【拿】【出】【来】【看】【看】【。】【常】【看】【到】【有】【人】【说】【什】【么】【错】【题】【本】【,】【正】【常】【人】【哪】【有】【时】【间】【抄】【那】【个】【!】【基】【本】【上】【是】【平】【时】【在】【主】【要】【复】【习】【资】【料】【上】【用】【自】【己】【能】【看】【懂】【的】【记】【号】【做】【标】【记】【,】【考】【前】【就】【可】【以】【拿】【出】【来】【翻】【看】【一】【下】【。】【如】【果】【还】【有】【时】【间】【,】【记】【一】【些】【容】【易】【记】【混】【的】【政】【治】【概】【念】【(】【如】【哲】【学】【中】【的】【唯】【物】【论】【、】【辩】【证】【法】【、】【历】【史】【唯】【物】【主】【义】【中】【的】【内】【容】【)】【,】【历】【史】【方】【面】【要】【记】【一】【些】【事】【情】【的】【发】【生】【年】【月】【、】【重】【要】【线】【索】【的】【发】【展】【路】【径】【,】【地】【理】【方】【面】【对】【几】【个】【关】【键】【地】【区】【的】【自】【然】【人】【文】【情】【况】【再】【复】【习】【复】【习】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刘】【霞】【:】【写】【日】【记】【有】【什】【么】【好】【处】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刘】【哥】【:】【写】【日】【记】【的】【好】【处】【是】【人】【为】【归】【纳】【出】【来】【的】【,】【甚】【至】【是】【被】【定】【义】【出】【来】【的】【。】【如】【果】【一】【个】【人】【以】【“】【写】【日】【记】【所】【拥】【有】【的】【种】【种】【好】【处】【”】【为】【目】【的】【而】【去】【写】【日】【记】【(】【尤】【其】【是】【年】【轻】【的】【各】【位】【朋】【友】【)】【,】【那】【么】【,】【我】【敢】【肯】【定】【他】【不】【会】【长】【期】【坚】【持】【下】【来】【,】【因】【为】【写】【日】【记】【的】【动】【机】【本】【身】【很】【纯】【粹】【,】【就】【是】【想】【写】【日】【记】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【日】【记】【能】【练】【字】【?】【我】【看】【到】【过】【很】【多】【以】【写】【作】【为】【特】【长】【的】【人】【,】【字】【写】【得】【跟】【狗】【爬】【似】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【日】【记】【能】【认】【字】【?】【“】【情】【窦】【初】【开】【的】【‘】【窦】【’】【字】【不】【会】【写】【,】【画】【个】【圈】【…】【…】【”】【相】【信】【我】【,】【不】【是】【每】【个】【写】【日】【记】【的】【人】【身】【边】【都】【有】【词】【典】【和】【电】【脑】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【日】【记】【能】【反】【省】【自】【己】【的】【言】【行】【?】【反】【省】【自】【己】【的】【言】【行】【本】【身】【是】【靠】【自】【身】【的】【心】【态】【,】【而】【不】【是】【写】【日】【记】【这】【个】【行】【为】【本】【身】【。】【我】【写】【日】【记】【就】【很】【少】【反】【省】【自】【己】【,】【当】【然】【我】【也】【不】【是】【一】【个】【各】【方】【面】【十】【分】【出】【众】【的】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【日】【记】【能】【培】【养】【写】【作】【能】【力】【?】【哈】【,】【如】【果】【你】【一】【直】【是】【以】【流】【水】【账】【的】【方】【法】【写】【日】【记】【,】【写】【的】【多】【了】【小】【心】【你】【的】【写】【作】【也】【带】【有】【浓】【厚】【的】【流】【水】【账】【风】【格】【哦】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【为】【什】【么】【要】【写】【日】【记】【?】【因】【为】【写】【日】【记】【能】【带】【给】【你】【快】【乐】【。】【有】【话】【则】【长】【,】【无】【话】【则】【短】【。】【兴】【致】【来】【了】【下】【笔】【千】【行】【,】【兴】【致】【索】【然】【骂】【几】【句】【娘】【。】【时】【间】【长】【了】【,】【写】【日】【记】【成】【了】【一】【种】【习】【惯】【,】【成】【了】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【部】【分】【,】【就】【好】【比】【每】【天】【起】【床】【洗】【脸】【刷】【牙】【一】【样】【自】【然】【。】【到】【时】【候】【,】【一】【天】【不】【写】【,】【就】【好】【像】【睡】【觉】【前】【没】【刷】【牙】【一】【样】【不】【自】【在】【。】【于】【是】【写】【日】【记】【成】【了】【一】【种】【灵】【魂】【的】【灌】【注】【,】【把】【自】【己】【的】【思】【想】【刻】【在】【了】【纸】【张】【之】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【①】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【坐】【落】【在】【苏】【北】【古】【镇】【梁】【垛】【2】【0】【国】【道】【与】【她】【擦】【肩】【而】【过】【,】【②】【川】【流】【不】【息】【的】【车】【辆】【带】【来】【了】【众】【多】【的】【信】【息】【与】【商】【品】【,】【带】【来】【了】【家】【乡】【日】【新】【月】【异】【的】【变】【化】【。】【串】【场】【河】【像】【一】【条】【绿】【色】【的】【丝】【绸】【,】【缓】【缓】【地】【向】【北】【飘】【去】【,】【养】【育】【着】【这】【一】【方】【朴】【实】【勤】【劳】【的】【水】【乡】【儿】【女】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【③】【这】【里】【虽】【然】【没】【有】【名】【人】【故】【居】【美】【丽】【传】【说】【,】【也】【没】【有】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【、】【高】【山】【大】【川】【。】【但】【她】【却】【是】【一】【朵】【刚】【绽】【开】【的】【花】【蕾】【,】【以】【其】【独】【特】【的】【④】【丰】【姿】【给】【人】【美】【的】【享】【受】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【啊】【,】【朋】【友】【,】【请】【到】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【来】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【⑤】【秋】【天】【,】【是】【家】【乡】【最】【热】【闹】【的】【季】【节】【。】【欢】【乐】【的】【田】【野】【上】【到】【处】【是】【翠】【玉】【镶】【金】【。】【那】【洁】【白】【的】【棉】【絮】【会】【把】【你】【团】【团】【围】【住】【,】【让】【你】【置】【身】【于】【白】【云】【中】【,】【一】【时】【竟】【不】【知】【高】【低】【,】【不】【辨】【东】【西】【。】【远】【处】【,】【一】【望】【无】【际】【的】【金】【黄】【色】【的】【稻】【子】【在】【微】【风】【中】【向】【你】【频】【频】【招】【手】【,】【急】【不】【可】【耐】【地】【叫】【着】【:】【“】【熟】【了】【!】【熟】【了】【!】【”】【⑥】【月】【光】【下】【热】【情】【好】【客】【的】【家】【乡】【人】【会】【拉】【着】【你】【的】【手】【谈】【天】【说】【地】【。】【那】【时】【候】【,】【他】【们】【会】【忘】【记】【一】【天】【的】【疲】【劳】【掰】【着】【手】【指】【头】【告】【诉】【你】【,】【谁】【家】【的】【小】【伙】【子】【出】【门】【半】【年】【就】【成】【了】【小】【老】【板】【,】【谁】【家】【的】【姑】【娘】【足】【不】【出】【户】【却】【是】【名】【闻】【遐】【迩】【的】【养】【蚕】【好】【手】【。】【他】【们】【仿】【佛】【有】【说】【不】【尽】【的】【新】【鲜】【事】【,】【⑦】【道】【不】【完】【的】【幸】【福】【水】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【⑧】【伴】【随】【着】【春】【天】【的】【脚】【步】【,】【展】【现】【你】【眼】【前】【的】【又】【是】【另】【一】【番】【景】【象】【。】【⑨】【黑】【土】【地】【立】【刻】【换】【上】【了】【一】【身】【绿】【装】【。】【金】【灿】【灿】【的】【油】【菜】【花】【⑩】【装】【满】【了】【你】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【惹】【来】【了】【一】【大】【群】【的】【蜜】【蜂】【、】【蝴】【蝶】【。】【绿】【油】【油】【的】【麦】【子】【也】【俯】【首】【微】【笑】【仿】【佛】【预】【示】【着】【又】【是】【一】【个】【丰】【收】【年】【。】【【】【1】【1】【】】【人】【们】【的】【欢】【歌】【笑】【语】【、】【机】【器】【的】【轰】【鸣】【声】【奏】【起】【了】【最】【动】【听】【的】【“】【闹】【三】【春】【”】【交】【响】【乐】【!】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【你】【知】【道】【吗】【,】【到】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【来】【一】【起】【捕】【鱼】【,】【这】【可】【是】【一】【件】【乐】【事】【。】【串】【场】【河】【以】【及】【大】【大】【小】【小】【的】【鱼】【塘】【是】【【】【1】【2】【】】【取】【之】【不】【尽】【的】【渔】【场】【。】【不】【必】【说】【柳】【下】【垂】【钓】【趣】【,】【烟】【雨】【透】【蓑】【衣】【,】【也】【不】【必】【说】【白】【帆】【映】【碧】【水】【,】【渔】【歌】【唱】【晚】【霞】【,】【单】【是】【冬】【季】【破】【冰】【捕】【鱼】【就】【可】【以】【让】【你】【乐】【而】【忘】【返】【了】【。】【请】【看】【吧】【,】【【】【1】【3】【】】【一】【网】【收】【到】【净】【是】【鱼】【,】【大】【的】【四】【五】【斤】【,】【小】【的】【也】【有】【二】【三】【斤】【,】【有】【时】【还】【能】【网】【到】【几】【只】【冬】【季】【罕】【见】【的】【大】【螃】【蟹】【。】【于】【是】【晚】【上】【便】【有】【鲜】【鱼】【肥】【蟹】【下】【饭】【了】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【【】【1】【4】【】】【朋】【友】【,】【如】【果】【说】【祖】【国】【是】【一】【座】【大】【花】【园】【,】【那】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【就】【是】【一】【朵】【带】【露】【的】【玫】【瑰】【沐】【浴】【着】【党】【的】【雨】【露】【阳】【光】【,】【开】【得】【更】【加】【绚】【丽】【多】【彩】【。】【2】【0】【年】【,】【我】【们】【镇】【纳】【税】【超】【亿】【元】【,】【跻】【身】【于】【苏】【北】【小】【康】【示】【范】【镇】【的】【行】【列】【。】【如】【今】【家】【乡】【人】【又】【在】【奏】【起】【时】【代】【的】【最】【强】【音】【加】【强】【精】【神】【文】【明】【建】【设】【,】【争】【取】【早】【日】【跨】【入】【省】【文】【明】【镇】【的】【先】【进】【行】【列】【。】【祝】【愿】【家】【乡】【骑】【上】【时】【代】【的】【骏】【马】【奔】【驰】【吧】【!】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【朋】【友】【,】【请】【到】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【来】【吧】【!】【这】【里】【物】【阜】【民】【丰】【,】【景】【美】【,】【人】【更】【美】【。】【你】【来】【了】【,】【保】【证】【你】【看】【不】【够】【,】【观】【不】【尽】【,】【梦】【里】【再】【重】【游】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【●】【点】【评】【:】【读】【罢】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【,】【感】【到】【有】【一】【种】【【】【1】【5】【】】【浓】【郁】【的】【乡】【土】【气】【息】【,】【清】【新】【而】【自】【然】【加】【之】【文】【题】【上】【一】【个】【“】【请】【”】【字】【,】【倍】【觉】【作】【者】【对】【家】【乡】【小】【镇】【的】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【。】【作】【者】【【】【1】【6】【】】【观】【察】【细】【致】【,】【反】【映】【家】【乡】【风】【貌】【,】【抓】【住】【了】【特】【色】【。】【既】【撷】【取】【了】【春】【、】【秋】【两】【季】【苏】【北】【水】【乡】【的】【不】【同】【的】【场】【景】【来】【写】【,】【又】【描】【写】【了】【冬】【季】【捕】【鱼】【这】【一】【令】【人】【乐】【而】【忘】【返】【的】【【】【1】【7】【】】【场】【面】【;】【既】【是】【一】【幅】【风】【景】【画】【、】【【】【1】【8】【】】【风】【俗】【画】【,】【又】【处】【处】【突】【出】【了】【家】【乡】【人】【的】【力】【量】【和】【精】【神】【,】【提】【升】【了】【文】【章】【的】【内】【涵】【▲】【另】【外】【,】【语】【言】【也】【形】【象】【生】【动】【,】【富】【有】【诗】【意】【一】【是】【综】【合】【运】【用】【了】【拟】【人】【、】【比】【喻】【等】【多】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【增】【添】【了】【文】【章】【的】【美】【感】【;】【二】【是】【善】【翻】【古】【人】【意】【,】【如】【“】【柳】【下】【垂】【钓】【趣】【,】【烟】【雨】【透】【蓑】【衣】【”】【“】【白】【帆】【映】【碧】【水】【,】【渔】【歌】【唱】【晚】【霞】【”】【读】【来】【更】【具】【【】【1】【9】【】】【艺】【术】【感】【染】【力】【;】【三】【是】【长】【句】【与】【短】【句】【、】【整】【句】【与】【散】【句】【的】【结】【合】【,】【使】【行】【文】【活】【泼】【、】【自】【由】【。】【这】【些】【都】【足】【见】【小】【作】【者】【【】【2】【0】【】】【在】【炼】【字】【炼】【句】【上】【下】【了】【工】【夫】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【①】【“】【坐】【落】【”】【一】【词】【是】【多】【余】【的】【。】【第】【一】【句】【可】【改】【为】【:】【苏】【北】【古】【镇】【梁】【垛】【是】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【②】【“】【信】【息】【”】【用】【“】【众】【多】【”】【来】【形】【容】【欠】【妥】【。】【“】【商】【品】【”】【既】【有】【带】【来】【的】【,】【也】【有】【运】【出】【的】【。】【画】【线】【句】【可】【改】【为】【:】【便】【捷】【的】【交】【通】【促】【进】【了】【经】【济】【的】【繁】【荣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【③】【此】【处】【可】【改】【为】【:】【这】【里】【虽】【然】【没】【有】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【、】【美】【丽】【传】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【④】【“】【丰】【姿】【”】【改】【为】【“】【风】【姿】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑤】【画】【线】【句】【对】【全】【段】【有】【引】【领】【的】【作】【用】【,】【但】【“】【热】【闹】【”】【似】【不】【如】【“】【繁】【忙】【”】【来】【得】【贴】【切】【。】【“】【翠】【玉】【镶】【金】【”】【用】【得】【也】【欠】【妥】【,】【因】【为】【棉】【田】【和】【稻】【田】【之】【间】【不】【存】【在】【“】【镶】【”】【和】【被】【“】【镶】【”】【的】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑥】【为】【什】【么】【一】【定】【要】【在】【月】【光】【下】【呢】【?】【完】【全】【可】【以】【没】【有】【这】【个】【时】【间】【限】【制】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑦】【画】【线】【句】【不】【通】【,】【只】【要】【把】【“】【水】【”】【改】【成】【“】【感】【”】【即】【可】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑧】【此】【句】【最】【好】【改】【为】【:】【春】【天】【,】【是】【家】【乡】【最】【美】【丽】【的】【季】【节】【。】【这】【样】【就】【可】【与】【前】【一】【段】【相】【呼】【应】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑨】【苏】【北】【的】【土】【地】【并】【非】【是】【黑】【色】【的】【,】【不】【要】【硬】【搬】【现】【成】【的】【词】【语】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑩】【用】【词】【生】【硬】【,】【—】【—】【你】【的】【眼】【睛】【能】【“】【装】【”】【得】【下】【吗】【?】【画】【线】【句】【删】【去】【反】【而】【和】【下】【文】【接】【得】【更】【紧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【1】【】】【画】【线】【句】【为】【套】【话】【。】【记】【住】【,】【这】【是】【广】【阔】【的】【田】【野】【,】【如】【果】【是】【在】【建】【筑】【工】【地】【或】【工】【厂】【的】【厂】【房】【里】【,】【则】【还】【有】【可】【能】【。】【删】【掉】【也】【不】【影】【响】【文】【中】【的】【表】【达】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【2】【】】【天】【下】【并】【没】【有】【“】【取】【之】【不】【尽】【的】【渔】【场】【”】【,】【赞】【美】【家】【乡】【,】【也】【不】【可】【有】【夸】【大】【之】【词】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【3】【】】【画】【线】【句】【可】【改】【为】【:】【网】【网】【打】【起】【的】【都】【是】【活】【蹦】【乱】【跳】【的】【肥】【鱼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【4】【】】【这】【一】【段】【的】【首】【句】【是】【套】【话】【,】【改】【为】【:】【家】【乡】【的】【经】【济】【发】【展】【更】【是】【迅】【速】【。】【这】【样】【和】【下】【文】【联】【系】【就】【紧】【密】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【5】【】】【“】【点】【评】【”】【写】【得】【尚】【可】【,】【但】【仍】【有】【可】【商】【榷】【之】【处】【。】【“】【浓】【郁】【”】【二】【字】【还】【谈】【不】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【6】【】】【从】【文】【中】【看】【不】【出】【作】【者】【有】【细】【致】【的】【观】【察】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【7】【】】【本】【文】【并】【无】【场】【面】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【8】【】】【“】【风】【俗】【画】【”】【无】【从】【谈】【起】【,】【“】【处】【处】【突】【出】【”】【则】【有】【过】【誉】【之】【嫌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【▲】【本】【文】【语】【言】【有】【优】【点】【,】【但】【问】【题】【似】【更】【多】【些】【。】【讲】【优】【点】【,】【也】【需】【恰】【如】【其】【分】【才】【是】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【9】【】】【“】【艺】【术】【感】【染】【力】【”】【这】【样】【的】【词】【语】【一】【般】【不】【能】【用】【来】【评】【价】【学】【生】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【2】【0】【】】【现】【在】【能】【在】【“】【炼】【字】【炼】【句】【上】【下】【工】【夫】【”】【的】【学】【生】【恐】【怕】【是】【少】【而】【又】【少】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】中国青岛市政府采购网【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【字】【靓】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【的】【字】【是】【指】【学】【生】【的】【钢】【笔】【字】【,】【在】【平】【时】【批】【阅】【作】【文】【时】【,】【我】【们】【常】【有】【这】【样】【的】【感】【觉】【,】【如】【果】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【字】【体】【方】【正】【、】【清】【秀】【,】【看】【后】【给】【人】【一】【种】【舒】【服】【的】【感】【觉】【,】【老】【师】【就】【愿】【意】【批】【改】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【,】【即】【使】【内】【容】【不】【是】【特】【好】【,】【也】【常】【常】【笔】【下】【留】【情】【,】【给】【一】【个】【较】【高】【的】【分】【值】【,】【如】【果】【卷】【面】【字】【写】【得】【不】【好】【,】【而】【且】【还】【乱】【,】【这】【样】【就】【让】【人】【懒】【得】【去】【看】【。】【考】【场】【上】【也】【一】【样】【,】【先】【不】【说】【内】【容】【,】【单】【从】【字】【这】【一】【点】【上】【来】【说】【,】【如】【果】【你】【的】【字】【体】【清】【秀】【,】【让】【阅】【者】【眼】【前】【一】【亮】【:】【这】【简】【直】【就】【是】【一】【部】【书】【法】【作】【品】【,】【那】【么】【你】【在】【第】【一】【时】【间】【就】【取】【得】【了】【印】【象】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【题】【鲜】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【的】【题】【指】【的】【是】【文】【章】【的】【题】【目】【,】【俗】【话】【说】【“】【题】【好】【文】【一】【半】【”】【,】【好】【的】【作】【文】【题】【,】【能】【够】【吸】【引】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【球】【,】【引】【起】【其】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【我】【们】【平】【时】【在】【读】【书】【时】【,】【思】【维】【习】【惯】【也】【常】【常】【是】【先】【看】【文】【章】【的】【标】【题】【,】【如】【果】【哪】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【题】【目】【吸】【引】【你】【,】【你】【可】【能】【先】【看】【哪】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【考】【场】【上】【作】【文】【也】【同】【理】【。】【文】【题】【是】【否】【新】【鲜】【,】【也】【成】【了】【一】【个】【评】【判】【的】【标】【准】【,】【一】【个】【好】【的】【文】【题】【,】【会】【让】【你】【的】【作】【文】【略】【胜】【一】【筹】【,】【如】【汪】【曾】【祺】【的】【《】【多】【年】【父】【子】【成】【兄】【弟】【》】【,】【这】【样】【的】【文】【题】【,】【给】【人】【一】【种】【新】【鲜】【的】【感】【觉】【,】【读】【者】【会】【想】【,】【为】【什】【么】【父】【子】【成】【了】【兄】【弟】【呢】【?】【让】【人】【思】【考】【,】【吸】【引】【你】【去】【品】【读】【。】【再】【如】【《】【我】【的】【爸】【爸】【不】【是】【伟】【人】【》】【,】【同】【样】【是】【写】【父】【爱】【的】【文】【章】【,】【这】【样】【的】【题】【目】【,】【从】【反】【面】【入】【题】【,】【角】【度】【更】【鲜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【 】【旨】【明】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【所】【说】【的】【旨】【明】【,】【是】【说】【作】【文】【的】【中】【心】【要】【明】【确】【,】【这】【是】【作】【文】【评】【分】【的】【第】【一】【要】【求】【,】【也】【就】【是】【说】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【必】【须】【是】【突】【出】【鲜】【明】【的】【,】【要】【赞】【扬】【什】【么】【,】【要】【批】【判】【什】【么】【,】【观】【点】【一】【定】【要】【鲜】【明】【。】【特】【别】【是】【散】【文】【这】【种】【文】【体】【,】【一】【些】【学】【生】【在】【写】【散】【文】【时】【,】【东】【一】【嘴】【西】【一】【嘴】【,】【杂】【乱】【无】【章】【,】【不】【知】【所】【云】【。】【散】【文】【贵】【在】【“】【形】【散】【而】【神】【不】【散】【”】【,】【如】【果】【连】【神】【都】【散】【了】【,】【那】【么】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【就】【是】【败】【笔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【 】【情】【真】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【感】【人】【心】【者】【,】【莫】【先】【乎】【情】【”】【,】【文】【贵】【情】【真】【,】【真】【实】【的】【情】【感】【表】【达】【,】【能】【让】【阅】【卷】【者】【与】【你】【的】【情】【感】【产】【生】【共】【鸣】【。】【就】【像】【电】【视】【剧】【一】【样】【,】【一】【些】【剧】【情】【会】【让】【你】【潸】【然】【泪】【下】【,】【好】【的】【文】【章】【亦】【如】【此】【,】【它】【会】【令】【读】【者】【在】【阅】【读】【过】【程】【中】【或】【爱】【或】【恨】【或】【微】【笑】【或】【流】【泪】【,】【究】【其】【原】【因】【是】【文】【章】【的】【真】【情】【感】【动】【了】【读】【者】【,】【使】【其】【与】【你】【一】【起】【产】【生】【共】【鸣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【.】【 】【首】【奇】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【的】【首】【指】【作】【文】【的】【开】【篇】【。】【一】【些】【同】【学】【的】【作】【文】【开】【篇】【第】【一】【段】【,】【写】【了】【大】【半】【页】【,】【看】【了】【前】【一】【句】【,】【便】【知】【下】【一】【句】【,】【无】【新】【无】【奇】【,】【令】【阅】【卷】【者】【感】【到】【劳】【累】【而】【厌】【倦】【,】【不】【愿】【再】【仔】【细】【认】【真】【读】【下】【去】【。】【这】【就】【要】【求】【考】【场】【作】【文】【时】【,】【让】【你】【的】【开】【篇】【就】【把】【阅】【卷】【者】【带】【入】【到】【一】【个】【全】【新】【的】【境】【界】【。】【如】【俞】【蓓】【芳】【《】【半】【碗】【剩】【饭】【》】【的】【开】【头】【“】【这】【与】【我】【们】【通】【常】【说】【的】【浪】【费】【粮】【食】【无】【关】【”】【。】【文】【章】【开】【头】【出】【奇】【的】【短】【,】【而】【且】【用】【一】【句】【话】【开】【了】【头】【,】【就】【把】【我】【们】【带】【入】【到】【一】【个】【充】【满】【悬】【念】【的】【世】【界】【,】【让】【我】【们】【的】【思】【维】【转】【弯】【。】【再】【如】【侯】【德】【云】【的】【《】【蒲】【公】【英】【的】【枕】【头】【》】【开】【篇】【“】【那】【天】【早】【晨】【的】【露】【水】【很】【大】【。】【”】【一】【句】【短】【而】【新】【奇】【的】【话】【,】【让】【我】【们】【因】【好】【奇】【而】【阅】【读】【下】【去】【。】【好】【的】【开】【始】【,】【成】【功】【的】【一】【半】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【6】【.】【尾】【力】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【里】【说】【的】【尾】【力】【是】【指】【文】【章】【的】【结】【尾】【要】【有】【感】【染】【力】【,】【因】【为】【好】【的】【结】【尾】【,】【是】【给】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【留】【下】【的】【最】【后】【、】【最】【深】【的】【印】【象】【,】【会】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【下】【决】【心】【给】【你】【一】【个】【高】【分】【的】【评】【判】【。】【如】【果】【结】【尾】【写】【不】【好】【,】【即】【使】【你】【前】【面】【的】【内】【容】【写】【得】【很】【好】【,】【可】【是】【经】【过】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【跟】【随】【你】【文】【章】【一】【路】【走】【来】【,】【结】【果】【在】【文】【章】【结】【尾】【留】【下】【不】【好】【的】【印】【象】【,】【那】【么】【前】【面】【产】【生】【的】【好】【感】【,】【也】【会】【被】【结】【尾】【不】【好】【给】【冲】【淡】【,】【所】【以】【一】【定】【要】【着】【力】【写】【好】【作】【文】【结】【尾】【,】【使】【之】【产】【生】【余】【音】【绕】【梁】【、】【韵】【味】【无】【穷】【的】【效】【果】【。】【这】【就】【很】【容】【易】【让】【你】【的】【作】【文】【胜】【券】【在】【握】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【清】【晨】【拉】【开】【窗】【帘】【,】【房】【间】【立】【时】【被】【阳】【光】【照】【亮】【。】【窗】【前】【正】【怒】【放】【的】【玫】【瑰】【,】【散】【发】【出】【淡】【淡】【的】【芳】【香】【,】【夜】【里】【,】【它】【花】【瓣】【闭】【拢】【;】【清】【晨】【它】【就】【再】【度】【开】【放】【,】【它】【的】【生】【命】【好】【顽】【强】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【情】【景】【令】【我】【十】【分】【感】【动】【。】【其】【实】【还】【有】【比】【这】【更】【令】【人】【感】【动】【的】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【知】【你】【是】【否】【听】【过】【这】【样】【一】【个】【凄】【美】【的】【故】【事】【:】【日】【本】【某】【户】【人】【家】【装】【修】【,】【拆】【木】【板】【墙】【时】【,】【发】【现】【一】【只】【壁】【虎】【被】【一】【根】【从】【外】【面】【钉】【进】【来】【的】【钉】【子】【钉】【住】【了】【尾】【巴】【。】【这】【居】【然】【是】【主】【人】【很】【长】【时】【间】【以】【前】【盖】【房】【子】【时】【钉】【上】【去】【的】【。】【见】【此】【状】【,】【主】【人】【暂】【时】【停】【止】【了】【装】【修】【,】【他】【要】【一】【探】【究】【竟】【。】【没】【多】【久】【,】【钻】【过】【来】【另】【一】【只】【壁】【虎】【,】【嘴】【里】【含】【着】【食】【物】【过】【来】【喂】【它】【…】【…】【主】【人】【一】【时】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【这】【是】【怎】【样】【的】【生】【命】【,】【怎】【样】【的】【爱】【呀】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【5】【月】【1】【5】【日】【,】【在】【汶】【川】【灾】【区】【垮】【塌】【的】【房】【子】【下】【,】【一】【位】【死】【去】【的】【母】【亲】【双】【膝】【跪】【地】【,】【支】【撑】【身】【体】【护】【住】【了】【三】【个】【月】【大】【的】【婴】【儿】【,】【而】【她】【的】【孩】【子】【却】【毫】【发】【未】【损】【。】【救】【援】【者】【在】【孩】【子】【的】【被】【子】【里】【,】【发】【现】【了】【一】【部】【手】【机】【,】【只】【见】【屏】【幕】【短】【信】【上】【显】【示】【着】【1】【8】【个】【字】【:】【“】【亲】【爱】【的】【宝】【贝】【,】【如】【果】【你】【还】【活】【着】【,】【一】【定】【记】【住】【,】【我】【爱】【你】【。】【”】【“】【我】【爱】【你】【”】【,】【多】【么】【美】【丽】【的】【语】【言】【,】【面】【对】【着】【这】【无】【私】【的】【爱】【,】【我】【们】【怎】【能】【不】【奉】【献】【出】【自】【己】【的】【一】【切】【,】【甚】【至】【是】【生】【命】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【界】【上】【有】【一】【种】【死】【,】【永】【远】【也】【不】【代】【表】【毁】【灭】【,】【那】【就】【是】【自】【落】【的】【花】【,】【归】【根】【的】【叶】【。】【生】【命】【虽】【然】【消】【逝】【了】【,】【但】【留】【给】【人】【间】【的】【一】【种】【精】【神】【,】【一】【种】【气】【质】【,】【一】【种】【洒】【脱】【却】【是】【永】【恒】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【间】【万】【物】【唯】【有】【生】【命】【最】【为】【珍】【贵】【,】【但】【又】【是】【转】【瞬】【即】【逝】【的】【,】【它】【短】【暂】【得】【如】【同】【天】【穹】【中】【一】【颗】【稍】【纵】【即】【逝】【的】【流】【星】【,】【那】【么】【我】【们】【不】【是】【应】【该】【让】【生】【命】【绽】【放】【更】【多】【的】【光】【彩】【吗】【?】【陆】【放】【翁】【的】【“】【零】【落】【成】【泥】【碾】【作】【尘】【,】【只】【有】【香】【如】【故】【”】【,】【文】【天】【祥】【的】【“】【人】【生】【自】【古】【谁】【无】【死】【,】【留】【取】【丹】【心】【照】【汗】【青】【”】【,】【岳】【飞】【的】【“】【怒】【发】【冲】【冠】【”】【,】【司】【马】【迁】【的】【忍】【辱】【负】【重】【著】【史】【记】【…】【…】【都】【在】【向】【我】【们】【诉】【说】【着】【生】【命】【的】【真】【谛】【。】【那】【么】【,】【是】【什】【么】【力】【量】【让】【他】【们】【变】【得】【不】【平】【凡】【呢】【?】【是】【活】【着】【的】【信】【念】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【你】【不】【能】【做】【一】【棵】【大】【树】【,】【那】【么】【就】【做】【一】【棵】【小】【草】【,】【铺】【就】【路】【边】【的】【林】【荫】【;】【如】【果】【你】【不】【能】【做】【一】【条】【小】【河】【,】【那】【么】【就】【做】【一】【滴】【水】【,】【去】【滋】【润】【一】【寸】【土】【地】【;】【如】【果】【你】【不】【能】【做】【无】【垠】【的】【大】【海】【,】【那】【么】【就】【做】【一】【朵】【浪】【花】【,】【点】【缀】【大】【海】【的】【波】【澜】【。】【我】【们】【的】【生】【命】【虽】【平】【凡】【,】【但】【要】【让】【它】【活】【得】【有】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【以】【“】【信】【念】【、】【生】【命】【”】【为】【话】【题】【的】【习】【作】【,】【小】【作】【者】【诠】【释】【自】【己】【对】【生】【命】【的】【理】【解】【,】【感】【悟】【深】【刻】【、】【独】【到】【,】【蕴】【涵】【哲】【理】【。】【在】【结】【构】【上】【,】【作】【者】【先】【写】【植】【物】【、】【动】【物】【,】【而】【后】【再】【写】【对】【”】【人】【”】【生】【命】【的】【层】【层】【深】【入】【的】【理】【性】【认】【识】【。】【文】【中】【选】【取】【事】【件】【真】【实】【、】【典】【型】【、】【有】【说】【服】【力】【,】【震】【撼】【人】【心】【,】【引】【发】【读】【者】【去】【思】【考】【。】【比】【喻】【、】【排】【比】【、】【引】【用】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【运】【用】【较】【成】【功】【,】【为】【文】【章】【增】【添】【文】【采】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【秀】【琴】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】中国青岛市政府采购网【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【年】【前】【的】【这】【段】【时】【间】【,】【当】【莘】【莘】【学】【子】【正】【为】【高】【考】【拼】【搏】【时】【,】【我】【利】【用】【出】【刊】【后】【的】【时】【光】【偷】【得】【半】【日】【闲】【,】【开】【始】【了】【练】【车】【生】【涯】【。】【其】【实】【算】【不】【得】【练】【车】【,】【每】【天】【大】【家】【不】【过】【是】【照】【着】【教】【练】【的】【口】【诀】【一】【遍】【遍】【重】【复】【:】【红】【点】【距】【杆】【一】【寸】【,】【七】【点】【方】【向】【,】【反】【手】【转】【半】【圈】【,】【回】【轮】【,】【三】【点】【方】【向】【打】【一】【圈】【…】【…】【车】【子】【缓】【缓】【入】【库】【,】【每】【次】【我】【停】【下】【车】【两】【边】【的】【边】【距】【都】【分】【毫】【不】【差】【,】【但】【所】【有】【人】【都】【知】【道】【这】【不】【过】【是】【机】【械】【化】【的】【条】【件】【反】【射】【,】【现】【实】【倒】【车】【时】【我】【们】【依】【然】【束】【手】【无】【策】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【以】【在】【等】【待】【驾】【照】【的】【漫】【长】【时】【间】【里】【,】【我】【一】【直】【在】【思】【索】【一】【个】【问】【题】【:】【驾】【校】【的】【训】【练】【方】【式】【与】【高】【考】【何】【其】【相】【似】【,】【而】【这】【最】【后】【的】【结】【果】【又】【能】【否】【真】【正】【代】【表】【我】【们】【的】【能】【力】【?】【直】【到】【拿】【上】【驾】【照】【第】【一】【天】【上】【路】【时】【我】【下】【意】【识】【地】【回】【避】【了】【种】【种】【险】【情】【后】【,】【才】【幡】【然】【醒】【悟】【:】【也】【许】【驾】【校】【的】【训】【练】【方】【式】【很】【少】【考】【虑】【实】【用】【,】【但】【它】【证】【明】【了】【特】【定】【阶】【段】【内】【你】【有】【掌】【握】【一】【种】【技】【巧】【的】【能】【力】【,】【而】【这】【种】【能】【力】【正】【是】【以】【后】【驾】【驶】【的】【最】【大】【保】【障】【。】【因】【为】【无】【论】【是】【驾】【校】【还】【是】【学】【校】【,】【都】【不】【会】【有】【足】【够】【的】【精】【力】【和】【金】【钱】【模】【拟】【现】【实】【,】【来】【评】【判】【我】【们】【在】【生】【活】【中】【真】【正】【的】【能】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【而】【整】【个】【高】【中】【生】【涯】【,】【在】【我】【彷】【徨】【乃】【至】【失】【望】【时】【不】【断】【追】【问】【自】【我】【的】【问】【题】【:】【我】【们】【放】【弃】【青】【春】【如】【此】【拼】【搏】【是】【为】【了】【什】【么】【?】【似】【乎】【也】【有】【了】【答】【案】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【高】【考】【前】【,】【我】【们】【的】【前】【方】【是】【乌】【托】【邦】【式】【的】【生】【活】【,】【是】【触】【手】【可】【及】【的】【清】【华】【北】【大】【,】【是】【浩】【歌】【一】【样】【的】【人】【生】【。】【但】【走】【着】【走】【着】【,】【在】【题】【海】【里】【寻】【着】【寻】【着】【,】【才】【知】【道】【,】【生】【活】【并】【不】【那】【么】【完】【美】【,】【也】【不】【永】【远】【那】【么】【公】【平】【。】【但】【是】【,】【这】【才】【是】【我】【们】【该】【拥】【抱】【的】【生】【活】【,】【因】【为】【它】【的】【不】【确】【定】【,】【我】【们】【才】【永】【远】【不】【会】【掉】【以】【轻】【心】【;】【因】【为】【它】【的】【不】【完】【美】【,】【我】【们】【才】【永】【远】【有】【改】【善】【它】【的】【可】【能】【。】【面】【对】【书】【山】【书】【海】【,】【你】【要】【想】【的】【不】【是】【多】【少】【天】【之】【后】【的】【高】【考】【,】【而】【是】【眼】【下】【这】【道】【题】【如】【何】【精】【妙】【。】【在】【做】【过】【一】【道】【一】【道】【题】【之】【后】【,】【内】【心】【的】【杂】【质】【会】【完】【全】【沉】【淀】【、】【澄】【澈】【无】【比】【。】【在】【看】【梦】【想】【的】【时】【候】【,】【它】【折】【射】【在】【心】【里】【的】【光】【影】【原】【来】【可】【以】【如】【此】【单】【纯】【宁】【静】【。】【潜】【心】【治】【学】【的】【意】【义】【,】【带】【来】【的】【并】【非】【只】【是】【成】【绩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【我】【们】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【破】【解】【难】【题】【,】【在】【获】【得】【漂】【亮】【分】【数】【的】【同】【时】【,】【也】【锻】【炼】【了】【我】【们】【克】【服】【困】【难】【的】【思】【维】【。】【或】【许】【有】【时】【你】【会】【怀】【疑】【,】【我】【们】【今】【日】【在】【课】【堂】【上】【的】【所】【学】【,】【有】【多】【少】【能】【运】【用】【到】【今】【后】【的】【工】【作】【与】【生】【活】【。】【但】【你】【又】【岂】【能】【知】【道】【,】【那】【些】【年】【少】【时】【就】【逃】【避】【了】【学】【习】【的】【人】【,】【在】【面】【对】【现】【实】【真】【正】【的】【压】【力】【时】【又】【如】【何】【能】【迎】【难】【而】【上】【?】【学】【习】【赋】【予】【我】【们】【的】【毅】【力】【和】【思】【维】【,】【将】【是】【我】【们】【在】【未】【来】【生】【活】【中】【不】【可】【或】【缺】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【毋】【庸】【讳】【言】【,】【高】【考】【作】【为】【我】【们】【追】【求】【公】【平】【原】【则】【制】【度】【化】【到】【选】【拔】【考】【试】【后】【的】【教】【育】【活】【动】【,】【曾】【犹】【如】【一】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【天】【使】【,】【给】【社】【会】【带】【来】【了】【公】【平】【、】【公】【正】【、】【文】【明】【、】【希】【望】【,】【然】【而】【今】【天】【,】【这】【只】【美】【丽】【的】【天】【使】【在】【一】【些】【人】【的】【心】【中】【已】【然】【蓬】【头】【垢】【面】【、】【尘】【埃】【满】【身】【。】【只】【是】【当】【我】【们】【企】【图】【挣】【脱】【一】【切】【独】【自】【面】【对】【生】【活】【时】【,】【现】【实】【的】【狰】【狞】【会】【让】【我】【们】【更】【加】【措】【手】【不】【及】【。】【不】【在】【正】【确】【的】【时】【间】【内】【证】【明】【自】【己】【,】【轻】【易】【的】【放】【纵】【并】【不】【会】【带】【来】【岁】【月】【的】【沉】【淀】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【场】【未】【知】【的】【盛】【宴】【,】【我】【们】【全】【力】【以】【赴】【。】【多】【年】【后】【倏】【忽】【而】【逝】【的】【高】【中】【岁】【月】【再】【翻】【来】【看】【时】【,】【心】【里】【却】【是】【馨】【香】【缕】【缕】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【嘘】【噎】【是】【模】【糊】【难】【辨】【的】【两】【位】【时】【间】【之】【神】【。】【我】【们】【能】【数】【出】【那】【么】【多】【大】【的】【、】【小】【的】【、】【好】【的】【、】【坏】【的】【神】【,】【却】【没】【有】【几】【个】【人】【说】【到】【嘘】【噎】【。】【即】【使】【在】【精】【雕】【细】【刻】【的】【青】【铜】【滴】【漏】【上】【,】【也】【从】【未】【看】【到】【过】【他】【们】【的】【影】【子】【。】【他】【们】【后】【来】【去】【了】【哪】【儿】【?】【时】【间】【在】【我】【们】【手】【指】【缝】【里】【缓】【慢】【流】【逝】【,】【我】【们】【浑】【然】【不】【知】【。】【先】【前】【的】【人】【们】【忘】【记】【了】【他】【们】【曾】【经】【存】【在】【,】【后】【来】【的】【人】【们】【干】【脆】【不】【知】【道】【有】【过】【他】【们】【。】【在】【对】【他】【们】【的】【追】【寻】【当】【中】【,】【甚】【至】【有】【人】【认】【为】【他】【们】【是】【一】【体】【,】【噎】【即】【嘘】【。】【看】【来】【我】【们】【不】【仅】【对】【时】【间】【之】【神】【众】【说】【纷】【纭】【,】【也】【对】【时】【间】【的】【操】【纵】【者】【的】【看】【法】【上】【存】【在】【严】【重】【分】【歧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【根】【据】【缩】【略】【记】【载】【画】【出】【嘘】【的】【形】【象】【:】【人】【的】【面】【孔】【,】【没】【有】【臂】【膀】【,】【从】【头】【上】【向】【下】【长】【出】【两】【只】【腿】【脚】【,】【好】【像】【把】【一】【个】【正】【常】【人】【砍】【掉】【双】【腿】【,】【两】【只】【臂】【膀】【换】【成】【两】【只】【腿】【脚】【,】【然】【后】【脑】【袋】【陷】【到】【和】【肩】【膀】【平】【齐】【。】【而】【我】【对】【照】【原】【文】【,】【觉】【得】【图】【像】【似】【有】【不】【对】【,】【原】【文】【说】【两】【只】【腿】【脚】【反】【转】【过】【来】【盘】【在】【头】【顶】【,】【腿】【脚】【还】【在】【该】【在】【的】【地】【方】【长】【出】【,】【而】【不】【是】【从】【头】【上】【长】【出】【。】【噎】【因】【为】【没】【有】【相】【貌】【记】【载】【,】【所】【以】【人】【们】【把】【它】【画】【成】【正】【常】【人】【的】【形】【象】【,】【左】【手】【遥】【指】【星】【辰】【,】【苍】【老】【得】【使】【人】【会】【想】【到】【他】【的】【祖】【父】【的】【名】【字】【。】【大】【概】【由】【于】【文】【字】【相】【连】【,】【噎】【又】【无】【相】【貌】【记】【载】【,】【导】【致】【有】【人】【认】【为】【噎】【即】【嘘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【嘘】【居】【住】【在】【日】【月】【山】【上】【,】【那】【山】【是】【天】【枢】【,】【日】【月】【次】【序】【出】【入】【的】【地】【方】【。】【嘘】【掌】【管】【日】【月】【,】【让】【它】【们】【轮】【流】【行】【经】【天】【际】【。】【该】【白】【昼】【了】【,】【月】【归】【来】【吧】【;】【该】【夜】【晚】【了】【,】【日】【归】【来】【吧】【。】【我】【们】【说】【到】【时】【间】【,】【如】【梭】【日】【月】【无】【疑】【是】【最】【为】【基】【本】【的】【计】【量】【物】【体】【。】【如】【此】【看】【来】【,】【嘘】【是】【我】【们】【最】【不】【该】【忘】【记】【的】【神】【了】【。】【噎】【居】【住】【在】【极】【远】【的】【西】【方】【,】【考】【察】【日】【月】【星】【辰】【的】【运】【行】【度】【数】【,】【来】【为】【我】【们】【寻】【出】【一】【年】【交】【接】【的】【十】【二】【个】【月】【。】【寒】【暑】【相】【易】【,】【多】【少】【青】【翠】【循】【环】【往】【复】【。】【十】【二】【个】【月】【,】【好】【像】【是】【噎】【的】【十】【二】【个】【不】【一】【样】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【他】【们】【依】【次】【传】【递】【,】【让】【生】【命】【之】【枝】【在】【手】【中】【变】【绿】【、】【变】【红】【、】【变】【黄】【、】【变】【白】【,】【然】【后】【又】【是】【一】【轮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【嘘】【噎】【的】【形】【象】【、】【掌】【管】【和】【他】【们】【之】【间】【的】【相】【互】【关】【系】【上】【看】【,】【其】【中】【至】【少】【隐】【藏】【了】【三】【个】【意】【义】【:】【第】【一】【,】【嘘】【是】【起】【源】【,】【噎】【是】【形】【成】【。】【不】【成】【人】【形】【的】【时】【间】【之】【神】【予】【以】【起】【源】【,】【具】【备】【人】【形】【的】【时】【间】【之】【神】【予】【以】【形】【成】【。】【第】【二】【,】【嘘】【是】【行】【动】【,】【噎】【是】【认】【识】【。】【嘘】【让】【日】【月】【创】【造】【昼】【夜】【,】【创】【造】【时】【间】【;】【噎】【则】【从】【日】【月】【星】【辰】【的】【运】【行】【中】【,】【寻】【找】【变】【化】【的】【规】【律】【。】【第】【三】【,】【嘘】【是】【根】【本】【,】【噎】【是】【衍】【生】【。】【白】【昼】【和】【夜】【晚】【,】【形】【成】【时】【间】【的】【基】【本】【划】【分】【,】【在】【此】【之】【上】【才】【有】【小】【的】【和】【大】【的】【分】【割】【与】【合】【成】【。】【一】【年】【十】【二】【个】【月】【,】【是】【白】【昼】【和】【夜】【晚】【最】【常】【见】【的】【一】【种】【组】【合】【方】【式】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【嘘】【还】【指】【慢】【慢】【吐】【气】【,】【噎】【还】【指】【吸】【气】【困】【难】【。】【难】【道】【时】【间】【,】【竟】【和】【气】【有】【着】【某】【种】【联】【系】【?】【在】【我】【们】【先】【人】【那】【看】【似】【玄】【妙】【、】【实】【际】【触】【及】【事】【物】【本】【质】【的】【宇】【宙】【图】【景】【中】【,】【气】【被】【认】【为】【是】【时】【间】【宇】【和】【空】【间】【宙】【的】【初】【始】【。】【于】【是】【时】【间】【之】【神】【嘘】【噎】【与】【气】【有】【关】【,】【在】【他】【们】【看】【来】【理】【所】【当】【然】【。】【推】【举】【天】【空】【的】【重】【生】【下】【嘘】【,】【按】【压】【大】【地】【的】【黎】【生】【下】【噎】【。】【天】【空】【轻】【松】【适】【宜】【慢】【慢】【吐】【气】【,】【大】【地】【沉】【重】【致】【使】【吸】【气】【困】【难】【。】【日】【月】【在】【天】【空】【好】【比】【放】【牧】【,】【十】【二】【个】【月】【在】【大】【地】【此】【去】【彼】【来】【。】【对】【立】【、】【统】【一】【的】【嘘】【噎】【,】【多】【像】【那】【两】【个】【在】【第】【一】【个】【月】【的】【第】【一】【个】【白】【昼】【,】【贴】【在】【两】【扇】【门】【上】【的】【鲜】【艳】【门】【神】【:】【哼】【哈】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】中国青岛市政府采购网【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【幼】【儿】【园】【开】【始】【,】【手】【工】【制】【作】【课】【就】【是】【滋】【生】【我】【自】【卑】【的】【土】【壤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【进】【入】【中】【学】【后】【,】【体】【育】【课】【又】【成】【了】【我】【自】【卑】【的】【催】【化】【剂】【,】【因】【为】【每】【次】【我】【都】【无】【法】【完】【成】【那】【些】【很】【简】【单】【的】【动】【作】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【天】【垫】【上】【课】【,】【那】【个】【黑】【脸】【的】【马】【老】【师】【终】【于】【发】【怒】【了】【,】【他】【生】【气】【地】【喝】【道】【:】【“】【站】【一】【边】【去】【,】【看】【别】【人】【怎】【么】【做】【!】【”】【我】【站】【到】【一】【边】【,】【看】【着】【同】【学】【们】【一】【个】【接】【一】【个】【地】【轻】【松】【翻】【滚】【,】【像】【一】【只】【只】【快】【乐】【的】【小】【皮】【球】【,】【而】【我】【…】【…】【我】【的】【脸】【羞】【愧】【得】【能】【冒】【出】【火】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【回】【到】【家】【,】【一】【见】【到】【爸】【爸】【,】【我】【立】【即】【扑】【进】【他】【的】【怀】【里】【,】【委】【屈】【地】【哭】【了】【。】【“】【都】【是】【爸】【爸】【不】【好】【,】【把】【这】【个】【缺】【点】【传】【给】【了】【你】【。】【”】【说】【着】【,】【爸】【爸】【就】【做】【了】【一】【个】【后】【滚】【翻】【的】【动】【作】【,】【却】【怎】【么】【也】【翻】【不】【过】【去】【。】【看】【到】【爸】【爸】【滑】【稽】【的】【样】【子】【我】【“】【扑】【哧】【”】【一】【声】【笑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【妈】【妈】【陪】【我】【去】【学】【校】【,】【她】【说】【要】【找】【马】【老】【师】【聊】【聊】【。】【我】【赶】【紧】【制】【止】【妈】【妈】【,】【怕】【妈】【妈】【惹】【出】【麻】【烦】【。】【妈】【妈】【笑】【了】【:】【“】【我】【不】【是】【去】【责】【怪】【老】【师】【,】【只】【是】【想】【告】【诉】【他】【,】【你】【会】【慢】【慢】【赶】【上】【去】【的】【,】【让】【他】【别】【太】【着】【急】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【体】【育】【课】【碰】【到】【我】【做】【不】【好】【的】【动】【作】【,】【马】【老】【师】【也】【不】【再】【强】【求】【我】【了】【,】【这】【让】【我】【暗】【自】【高】【兴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【不】【是】【我】【那】【次】【无】【意】【在】【办】【公】【室】【门】【口】【听】【到】【老】【师】【的】【对】【话】【,】【也】【许】【我】【的】【生】【活】【会】【一】【直】【平】【静】【如】【水】【。】【那】【天】【,】【我】【到】【老】【师】【办】【公】【室】【交】【作】【业】【,】【走】【到】【门】【口】【,】【听】【见】【马】【老】【师】【提】【到】【我】【的】【名】【字】【:】【“】【那】【个】【李】【旖】【旎】【啊】【,】【你】【不】【知】【道】【吗】【?】【她】【被】【诊】【断】【为】【‘】【脑】【瘫】【’】【。】【”】【“】【‘】【脑】【瘫】【’】【不】【是】【一】【种】【很】【严】【重】【的】【智】【力】【疾】【病】【吗】【?】【我】【看】【她】【智】【力】【还】【可】【以】【。】【”】【这】【是】【语】【文】【老】【师】【的】【声】【音】【。】【“】【她】【是】【轻】【微】【的】【,】【主】【要】【表】【现】【为】【动】【作】【方】【面】【的】【缺】【陷】【,】【这】【是】【听】【她】【妈】【妈】【说】【的】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【下】【子】【,】【我】【眼】【前】【模】【糊】【了】【,】【难】【怪】【家】【里】【有】【那】【么】【多】【关】【于】【脑】【瘫】【的】【书】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【股】【莫】【名】【的】【力】【量】【促】【使】【我】【狂】【奔】【起】【来】【,】【我】【要】【远】【离】【学】【校】【,】【远】【离】【人】【群】【,】【远】【离】【这】【个】【嘲】【弄】【我】【的】【世】【界】【。】【我】【狂】【奔】【回】【家】【,】【把】【自】【己】【关】【进】【房】【间】【里】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【爸】【爸】【撞】【开】【了】【房】【门】【,】【从】【床】【上】【拉】【起】【了】【我】【说】【:】【“】【听】【着】【,】【李】【旖】【旎】【,】【无】【论】【发】【生】【什】【么】【事】【,】【你】【都】【不】【能】【把】【爱】【你】【的】【父】【母】【拒】【之】【门】【外】【!】【”】【“】【我】【是】【个】【脑】【瘫】【患】【者】【,】【为】【什】【么】【你】【们】【不】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【你】【们】【已】【经】【骗】【了】【我】【1】【5】【年】【,】【还】【想】【再】【骗】【我】【到】【什】【么】【时】【候】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爸】【爸】【沉】【默】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【然】【后】【握】【住】【我】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【你】【长】【大】【了】【,】【许】【多】【事】【情】【是】【应】【该】【告】【诉】【你】【了】【。】【你】【确】【实】【是】【患】【有】【轻】【度】【脑】【瘫】【,】【我】【们】【不】【告】【诉】【你】【,】【是】【不】【想】【让】【病】【魔】【在】【你】【心】【中】【留】【下】【阴】【影】【,】【我】【们】【只】【希】【望】【你】【能】【快】【乐】【…】【…】【还】【有】【,】【爸】【爸】【再】【告】【诉】【你】【一】【个】【秘】【密】【,】【其】【实】【爸】【爸】【也】【患】【有】【轻】【度】【脑】【瘫】【。】【也】【许】【你】【不】【相】【信】【,】【但】【这】【是】【事】【实】【,】【爸】【爸】【之】【所】【以】【现】【在】【才】【告】【诉】【你】【这】【个】【秘】【密】【,】【是】【因】【为】【爸】【爸】【想】【让】【你】【知】【道】【,】【脑】【瘫】【患】【者】【也】【能】【活】【得】【精】【彩】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【的】【,】【爸】【爸】【活】【得】【很】【精】【彩】【,】【在】【商】【场】【上】【叱】【咤】【风】【云】【,】【对】【一】【千】【多】【名】【员】【工】【指】【挥】【若】【定】【。】【可】【我】【对】【他】【的】【说】【法】【很】【怀】【疑】【,】【也】【许】【这】【只】【不】【过】【是】【美】【丽】【的】【谎】【言】【,】【只】【是】【为】【了】【找】【回】【我】【的】【自】【信】【。】【妈】【妈】【看】【到】【了】【我】【眼】【里】【的】【疑】【惑】【:】【“】【细】【细】【看】【,】【你】【就】【会】【发】【现】【,】【爸】【爸】【走】【路】【脚】【是】【踮】【着】【的】【,】【为】【此】【他】【曾】【经】【很】【苦】【恼】【。】【”】【“】【是】【的】【,】【我】【曾】【经】【很】【绝】【望】【,】【像】【你】【现】【在】【一】【样】【。】【后】【来】【我】【发】【现】【,】【当】【我】【忽】【略】【了】【自】【己】【的】【缺】【点】【,】【别】【人】【也】【就】【不】【会】【注】【意】【了】【!】【”】【细】【看】【下】【来】【,】【爸】【爸】【确】【实】【踮】【着】【脚】【走】【路】【。】【为】【了】【此】【事】【,】【乡】【下】【的】【奶】【奶】【也】【打】【电】【话】【,】【说】【爸】【爸】【那】【时】【的】【症】【状】【比】【我】【严】【重】【得】【多】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【像】【小】【说】【里】【的】【故】【事】【,】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【曲】【折】【离】【奇】【,】【我】【不】【得】【不】【静】【下】【心】【来】【整】【理】【自】【己】【纷】【乱】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【那】【天】【我】【得】【出】【了】【这】【样】【的】【结】【论】【:】【扬】【长】【避】【短】【,】【我】【也】【会】【像】【爸】【爸】【那】【样】【成】【功】【;】【在】【奋】【斗】【面】【前】【,】【脑】【瘫】【也】【不】【过】【是】【只】【纸】【老】【虎】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【经】【过】【这】【场】【风】【波】【的】【洗】【礼】【,】【我】【一】【下】【子】【成】【熟】【了】【许】【多】【,】【在】【生】【活】【的】【道】【路】【上】【,】【我】【重】【拾】【起】【自】【信】【,】【艰】【难】【前】【行】【,】【然】【后】【摘】【取】【了】【一】【串】【串】【硕】【果】【:】【考】【上】【了】【重】【点】【中】【学】【,】【拿】【到】【了】【不】【少】【竞】【赛】【获】【奖】【证】【书】【…】【…】【在】【父】【母】【的】【呵】【护】【与】【支】【持】【下】【,】【我】【的】【人】【生】【不】【很】【顺】【利】【却】【很】【精】【彩】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【年】【暑】【假】【,】【我】【去】【了】【姑】【妈】【家】【。】【无】【事】【和】【姑】【妈】【闲】【聊】【,】【我】【谈】【到】【爸】【爸】【的】【脑】【瘫】【,】【她】【笑】【了】【起】【来】【:】【“】【你】【爸】【?】【他】【什】【么】【病】【也】【没】【有】【,】【小】【时】【候】【可】【顽】【皮】【了】【!】【”】【“】【那】【为】【什】【么】【爸】【爸】【走】【路】【总】【有】【点】【踮】【脚】【,】【那】【可】【是】【脑】【瘫】【的】【症】【状】【。】【”】【“】【他】【踮】【脚】【吗】【?】【不】【可】【能】【!】【不】【过】【他】【学】【踮】【脚】【尖】【走】【路】【倒】【学】【得】【蛮】【像】【的】【,】【他】【那】【个】【模】【样】【最】【笑】【人】【了】【!】【”】【姑】【妈】【沉】【浸】【在】【对】【往】【事】【的】【回】【忆】【里】【,】【而】【我】【却】【怔】【在】【姑】【妈】【的】【笑】【容】【中】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【我】【才】【体】【会】【到】【父】【母】【的】【良】【苦】【用】【心】【,】【他】【们】【用】【谎】【言】【的】【剪】【刀】【一】【次】【次】【地】【修】【剪】【掉】【我】【生】【命】【树】【上】【自】【卑】【的】【枝】【条】【,】【所】【以】【我】【的】【自】【信】【才】【得】【以】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【恣】【意】【伸】【展】【。】【我】【要】【立】【刻】【打】【电】【话】【给】【爸】【爸】【,】【告】【诉】【他】【,】【下】【次】【见】【到】【我】【的】【时】【候】【不】【必】【再】【踮】【着】【脚】【走】【路】【了】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【在】【父】【亲】【的】【谎】【言】【里】【的】【作】【者】【,】【丝】【毫】【没】【有】【被】【蒙】【蔽】【和】【愚】【弄】【的】【感】【觉】【,】【因】【为】【那】【是】【父】【亲】【用】【善】【意】【和】【关】【爱】【织】【成】【的】【一】【张】【网】【,】【一】【张】【具】【有】【弹】【跳】【功】【能】【的】【网】【,】【借】【网】【之】【力】【,】【作】【者】【对】【生】【活】【有】【了】【百】【折】【不】【挠】【的】【坚】【韧】【和】【游】【刃】【有】【余】【的】【跨】【越】【。】【以】【时】【间】【为】【经】【,】【以】【其】【自】【身】【的】【经】【历】【和】【相】【伴】【而】【来】【的】【思】【绪】【、】【心】【情】【为】【纬】【,】【作】【者】【将】【这】【一】【段】【“】【曲】【折】【离】【奇】【”】【的】【生】【活】【写】【得】【鲜】【活】【饱】【满】【。】【文】【中】【时】【常】【跳】【跃】【出】【耐】【人】【寻】【味】【的】【哲】【理】【性】【文】【字】【,】【而】【渗】【透】【于】【文】【字】【之】【中】【的】【浓】【郁】【的】【父】【爱】【便】【跃】【然】【纸】【上】【。】【细】【节】【描】【写】【为】【文】【章】【助】【力】【不】【少】【,】【那】【一】【次】【次】【事】【件】【,】【一】【幕】【幕】【场】【景】【,】【一】【句】【句】【对】【话】【,】【俨】【然】【让】【我】【们】【置】【身】【其】【中】【,】【也】【让】【因】【爱】【而】【起】【的】【谎】【言】【变】【得】【出】【乎】【意】【料】【又】【在】【情】【理】【之】【中】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【杨】【春】【芬】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【背】【诵】【着】【茅】【盾】【的】【《】【白】【杨】【礼】【赞】【》】【,】【我】【突】【然】【生】【发】【出】【了】【疑】【问】【:】【究】【竟】【什】【么】【是】【美】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【世】【间】【万】【物】【,】【芸】【芸】【众】【生】【间】【不】【乏】【美】【的】【事】【物】【。】【有】【人】【赞】【白】【杨】【的】【雄】【姿】【;】【有】【人】【咏】【梅】【花】【的】【傲】【骨】【;】【有】【人】【欣】【赏】【莲】【的】【“】【出】【淤】【泥】【而】【不】【染】【”】【;】【有】【人】【赞】【赏】【松】【的】【笔】【直】【挺】【拔】【;】【有】【人】【陶】【醉】【杨】【柳】【的】【婆】【娑】【婀】【娜】【…】【…】【在】【欣】【赏】【者】【的】【眼】【中】【,】【他】【不】【仅】【见】【到】【物】【的】【表】【象】【,】【他】【还】【看】【到】【物】【的】【本】【质】【。】【于】【是】【有】【了】【菊】【之】【清】【高】【、】【竹】【之】【虚】【心】【、】【兰】【之】【幽】【雅】【、】【松】【之】【刚】【毅】【、】【水】【之】【清】【明】【、】【雪】【之】【纯】【净】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【由】【于】【人】【们】【生】【活】【环】【境】【的】【不】【同】【,】【所】【受】【教】【育】【的】【不】【同】【,】【各】【自】【修】【养】【不】【同】【,】【人】【们】【的】【审】【美】【观】【也】【就】【不】【尽】【相】【同】【。】【同】【是】【面】【对】【杨】【柳】【,】【有】【人】【赞】【其】【多】【姿】【,】【有】【人】【贬】【其】【轻】【浮】【;】【同】【是】【看】【见】【牡】【丹】【,】【有】【人】【赏】【其】【雍】【容】【,】【有】【人】【责】【其】【妖】【冶】【。】【于】【是】【同】【是】【生】【活】【于】【大】【千】【世】【界】【中】【,】【有】【人】【厌】【恶】【世】【俗】【,】【甘】【愿】【隐】【居】【山】【林】【或】【削】【发】【为】【僧】【;】【有】【人】【面】【对】【困】【境】【,】【积】【极】【乐】【观】【,】【努】【力】【创】【造】【,】【努】【力】【改】【变】【;】【有】【人】【衣】【食】【无】【忧】【,】【却】【觉】【得】【活】【得】【没】【意】【思】【;】【有】【人】【“】【但】【愿】【长】【醉】【不】【复】【醒】【”】【;】【有】【人】【“】【真】【想】【再】【活】【五】【百】【年】【”】【…】【…】【人】【哪】【,】【真】【是】【不】【同】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【我】【奉】【劝】【人】【们】【还】【是】【积】【极】【乐】【观】【面】【对】【生】【活】【,】【睁】【大】【我】【们】【的】【双】【眼】【去】【发】【现】【美】【,】【用】【我】【们】【的】【双】【手】【去】【创】【造】【美】【,】【更】【何】【况】【万】【物】【确】【都】【有】【其】【美】【的】【一】【面】【:】【有】【人】【从】【臭】【椿】【树】【上】【看】【出】【其】【实】【用】【的】【特】【点】【;】【有】【人】【从】【铺】【路】【石】【身】【上】【读】【出】【其】【默】【默】【奉】【献】【的】【品】【质】【;】【有】【人】【从】【绿】【叶】【身】【上】【看】【到】【了】【高】【贵】【的】【灵】【魂】【;】【甚】【至】【有】【人】【从】【凶】【残】【者】【身】【上】【发】【现】【有】【时】【他】【还】【有】【一】【丝】【的】【良】【善】【;】【有】【人】【从】【狭】【隘】【者】【身】【上】【有】【时】【也】【能】【感】【受】【到】【他】【宽】【容】【的】【一】【面】【。】【蚂】【蚁】【虽】【微】【小】【,】【但】【它】【身】【上】【却】【也】【蕴】【藏】【着】【伟】【大】【的】【力】【量】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【帝】【给】【了】【我】【们】【一】【颗】【会】【思】【想】【的】【头】【脑】【,】【并】【赐】【给】【了】【我】【们】【一】【双】【明】【亮】【的】【眼】【睛】【。】【上】【帝】【将】【我】【们】【看】【做】【天】【使】【,】【我】【们】【就】【要】【用】【天】【使】【的】【眼】【睛】【去】【发】【现】【、】【寻】【找】【真】【善】【美】【,】【用】【智】【慧】【的】【头】【脑】【接】【受】【这】【一】【切】【的】【美】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【间】【自】【有】【真】【善】【美】【,】【思】【辨】【发】【现】【是】【关】【键】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【鹰】【击】【长】【空】【、】【鱼】【翔】【浅】【底】【、】【潭】【映】【晓】【月】【、】【梨】【花】【带】【雨】【。】【红】【杏】【枝】【头】【春】【意】【闹】【,】【云】【破】【月】【来】【花】【弄】【影】【。】【“】【美】【”】【无】【处】【不】【在】【,】【无】【处】【不】【有】【。】【只】【要】【你】【有】【一】【双】【智】【慧】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【有】【海】【纳】【百】【川】【的】【雅】【量】【,】【自】【然】【就】【有】【丑】【小】【鸭】【变】【成】【美】【丽】【的】【白】【天】【鹅】【、】【大】【肚】【青】【蛙】【变】【成】【英】【俊】【王】【子】【、】【灰】【姑】【娘】【变】【成】【高】【贵】【皇】【后】【的】【故】【事】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【的】【真】【谛】【在】【于】【包】【容】【,】【在】【于】【接】【纳】【。】【善】【于】【思】【辨】【、】【发】【现】【是】【本】【文】【构】【思】【的】【亮】【点】【。】【小】【作】【者】【从】【生】【命】【的】【思】【辨】【出】【发】【得】【出】【:】【“】【七】【色】【中】【缺】【了】【哪】【一】【样】【,】【都】【构】【不】【成】【彩】【虹】【,】【五】【味】【中】【少】【了】【哪】【一】【种】【,】【都】【烹】【不】【出】【佳】【肴】【。】【用】【透】【明】【的】【眼】【光】【看】【世】【界】【,】【万】【物】【仍】【旧】【纯】【洁】【;】【用】【博】【爱】【的】【心】【灵】【品】【社】【会】【,】【人】【间】【依】【然】【美】【好】【。】【”】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【赵】【同】【宇】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】中国青岛市政府采购网【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【少】【中】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【课】【上】【常】【常】【感】【到】【“】【没】【什】【么】【可】【写】【”】【,】【或】【抱】【着】【“】【抓】【到】【一】【个】【算】【一】【个】【”】【,】【“】【拾】【到】【篮】【里】【就】【是】【菜】【”】【的】【态】【度】【,】【这】【是】【不】【可】【取】【的】【。】【没】【有】【米】【,】【当】【然】【无】【以】【成】【粥】【;】【有】【了】【米】【呢】【,】【关】【键】【还】【要】【注】【意】【舂】【洗】【,】【去】【除】【杂】【质】【,】【这】【样】【烧】【成】【的】【粥】【才】【香】【甜】【可】【口】【。】【怎】【样】【把】【自】【己】【所】【汲】【取】【的】【材】【料】【用】【在】【作】【文】【里】【呢】【?】【这】【涉】【及】【文】【章】【的】【选】【材】【问】【题】【。】【选】【材】【就】【是】【细】【筛】【精】【选】【材】【料】【,】【即】【在】【确】【立】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【的】【基】【础】【上】【对】【占】【有】【的】【材】【料】【进】【行】【取】【舍】【的】【构】【思】【过】【程】【。】【如】【果】【选】【材】【得】【当】【,】【可】【以】【增】【强】【文】【章】【的】【表】【现】【力】【,】【让】【同】【学】【和】【老】【师】【刮】【目】【相】【看】【。】【如】【果】【选】【材】【不】【当】【,】【就】【会】【干】【扰】【、】【冲】【淡】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【,】【影】【响】【、】【削】【弱】【文】【章】【的】【说】【服】【力】【、】【感】【染】【力】【。】【从】【这】【个】【意】【义】【上】【说】【,】【选】【材】【的】【确】【是】【一】【门】【高】【超】【的】【写】【作】【艺】【术】【。】【那】【么】【,】【如】【何】【艺】【术】【地】【构】【建】【作】【文】【的】【选】【材】【策】【略】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【切】【题】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【准】【确】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【切】【题】【,】【指】【文】【章】【中】【所】【选】【用】【的】【材】【料】【要】【符】【合】【中】【心】【的】【需】【要】【,】【使】【材】【料】【的】【含】【义】【与】【主】【题】【完】【全】【一】【致】【。】【因】【为】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【是】【蕴】【涵】【渗】【透】【在】【材】【料】【之】【中】【的】【,】【特】【定】【的】【材】【料】【只】【能】【表】【现】【一】【个】【特】【定】【的】【中】【心】【,】【所】【以】【选】【材】【必】【须】【切】【题】【。】【要】【力】【求】【选】【取】【最】【能】【表】【现】【中】【心】【的】【材】【料】【,】【果】【断】【舍】【弃】【与】【中】【心】【无】【关】【的】【材】【料】【。】【万】【不】【可】【把】【跟】【中】【心】【毫】【无】【关】【系】【的】【材】【料】【堆】【砌】【起】【来】【硬】【凑】【成】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【这】【好】【比】【“】【煮】【鸡】【不】【煺】【毛】【”】【,】【鸡】【肉】【本】【是】【珍】【馐】【佳】【肴】【,】【若】【连】【毛】【一】【起】【煮】【,】【谁】【还】【愿】【吃】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【熟】【知】【的】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【的】【小】【说】【《】【孔】【乙】【己】【》】【,】【它】【之】【所】【以】【脍】【炙】【人】【口】【,】【恐】【怕】【跟】【作】【者】【精】【心】【的】【选】【材】【不】【无】【关】【系】【。】【文】【章】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【地】【详】【写】【孔】【乙】【己】【那】【又】【脏】【又】【破】【的】【长】【衫】【、】【为】【掩】【饰】【偷】【书】【的】【辩】【白】【、】【之】【乎】【者】【也】【的】【谈】【吐】【以】【及】【教】【认】【“】【茴】【”】【字】【的】【四】【种】【写】【法】【。】【这】【些】【题】【材】【表】【现】【了】【孔】【乙】【己】【的】【迂】【腐】【、】【麻】【木】【,】【充】【分】【说】【明】【他】【受】【封】【建】【教】【育】【思】【想】【毒】【害】【之】【深】【,】【说】【明】【科】【举】【制】【度】【不】【是】【把】【人】【培】【养】【成】【丁】【举】【人】【那】【样】【的】【损】【人】【者】【,】【就】【是】【把】【人】【糟】【蹋】【成】【孔】【乙】【己】【这】【样】【的】【被】【损】【害】【者】【。】【而】【对】【孔】【乙】【己】【如】【何】【偷】【书】【、】【如】【何】【挨】【打】【的】【过】【程】【,】【虽】【从】【侧】【面】【略】【写】【,】【但】【这】【些】【材】【料】【也】【与】【表】【达】【中】【心】【有】【关】【系】【,】【只】【不】【过】【作】【者】【采】【用】【这】【种】【有】【正】【有】【侧】【,】【有】【详】【有】【略】【的】【描】【写】【,】【使】【故】【事】【情】【节】【有】【起】【有】【伏】【,】【一】【味】【详】【或】【一】【味】【略】【都】【会】【使】【读】【者】【感】【到】【厌】【倦】【。】【总】【之】【,】【材】【料】【要】【服】【从】【“】【意】【”】【的】【安】【排】【,】【要】【以】【“】【意】【”】【统】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【切】【题】【的】【问】【题】【如】【此】【重】【要】【,】【而】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【中】【的】【选】【材】【毛】【病】【却】【又】【常】【常】【出】【在】【这】【里】【。】【究】【其】【原】【因】【有】【二】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【不】【勤】【于】【排】【列】【筛】【选】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【些】【学】【生】【写】【作】【文】【喜】【欢】【速】【成】【,】【提】【笔】【便】【写】【,】【写】【完】【后】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【还】【有】【更】【切】【题】【的】【材】【料】【。】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【删】【去】【重】【写】【。】【倘】【在】【平】【时】【,】【倒】【也】【罢】【了】【;】【若】【是】【限】【时】【作】【文】【,】【删】【吧】【不】【允】【许】【,】【不】【删】【吧】【却】【不】【甘】【心】【。】【这】【样】【岂】【不】【搞】【得】【很】【尴】【尬】【?】【如】【果】【在】【动】【笔】【前】【给】【自】【己】【留】【点】【时】【间】【,】【将】【所】【有】【能】【够】【想】【到】【的】【材】【料】【都】【集】【中】【起】【来】【,】【给】【它】【们】【排】【排】【队】【,】【从】【中】【确】【定】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【该】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【不】【该】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【先】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【后】【用】【,】【经】【过】【一】【番】【排】【列】【筛】【选】【,】【就】【不】【会】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【、】【顾】【此】【失】【彼】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【不】【善】【于】【选】【用】【辅】【助】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【的】【学】【生】【时】【常】【感】【叹】【,】【同】【一】【件】【事】【、】【同】【一】【个】【人】【,】【别】【人】【写】【出】【来】【就】【格】【外】【细】【致】【、】【生】【动】【,】【而】【一】【到】【自】【己】【手】【里】【就】【干】【瘪】【得】【很】【。】【原】【因】【在】【于】【选】【材】【时】【只】【限】【于】【一】【些】【直】【接】【的】【、】【正】【面】【的】【表】【现】【主】【题】【的】【材】【料】【,】【而】【对】【那】【些】【间】【接】【的】【、】【侧】【面】【的】【材】【料】【则】【熟】【视】【无】【睹】【,】【冷】【落】【不】【用】【。】【这】【些】【辅】【助】【材】【料】【表】【面】【看】【上】【去】【似】【与】【写】【作】【意】【图】【没】【有】【多】【大】【关】【系】【,】【可】【是】【经】【过】【作】【者】【精】【巧】【的】【剪】【裁】【加】【工】【,】【却】【可】【以】【出】【人】【意】【料】【地】【对】【主】【题】【起】【到】【烘】【托】【、】【反】【衬】【、】【强】【化】【的】【作】【用】【,】【使】【文】【章】【血】【肉】【丰】【满】【,】【细】【腻】【感】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【真】【实】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【可】【信】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【代】【学】【者】【钱】【谦】【益】【说】【:】【“】【真】【则】【精】【金】【美】【玉】【,】【伪】【则】【瓦】【砾】【粪】【土】【也】【。】【”】【这】【句】【话】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【在】【作】【文】【选】【材】【时】【,】【不】【只】【要】【看】【材】【料】【是】【否】【切】【题】【,】【还】【要】【看】【它】【是】【否】【真】【实】【,】【是】【否】【具】【有】【“】【可】【信】【”】【度】【。】【只】【有】【真】【实】【,】【只】【有】【信】【实】【,】【文】【章】【才】【有】【生】【命】【力】【,】【才】【能】【感】【动】【人】【、】【打】【动】【人】【。】【选】【材】【真】【实】【包】【含】【两】【方】【面】【内】【容】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【?】【郾】【 】【生】【活】【真】【实】【:】【选】【取】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【实】【的】【材】【料】【,】【必】【然】【是】【为】【同】【学】【们】【所】【熟】【知】【的】【材】【料】【。】【法】【国】【艺】【术】【大】【师】【罗】【丹】【说】【过】【:】【“】【最】【美】【的】【题】【材】【摆】【在】【你】【们】【面】【前】【,】【那】【就】【是】【你】【们】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【物】【。】【”】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【,】【写】【起】【来】【才】【能】【得】【心】【应】【手】【。】【假】【如】【没】【有】【登】【过】【东】【岳】【,】【决】【不】【会】【有】【“】【一】【览】【众】【山】【小】【”】【的】【感】【受】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【见】【过】【庐】【山】【,】【一】【定】【不】【会】【产】【生】【“】【飞】【流】【直】【下】【三】【千】【尺】【”】【的】【共】【鸣】【。】【不】【置】【身】【于】【枫】【林】【晚】【景】【,】【哪】【有】【“】【霜】【叶】【红】【于】【二】【月】【花】【”】【之】【赞】【叹】【;】【不】【亲】【历】【水】【乡】【春】【天】【,】【怎】【会】【直】【抒】【“】【能】【不】【忆】【江】【南】【”】【之】【胸】【臆】【。】【中】【学】【生】【们】【初】【学】【写】【作】【,】【应】【该】【选】【取】【自】【己】【最】【为】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【或】【事】【来】【写】【。】【在】【童】【年】【的】【漫】【长】【记】【忆】【中】【,】【一】【定】【有】【我】【们】【终】【生】【难】【忘】【的】【趣】【事】【;】【在】【朝】【夕】【相】【处】【的】【伙】【伴】【中】【,】【一】【定】【有】【我】【们】【情】【投】【意】【合】【的】【挚】【友】【;】【在】【成】【长】【的】【日】【历】【里】【,】【一】【定】【记】【载】【着】【我】【们】【的】【成】【功】【与】【失】【败】【。】【何】【不】【把】【它】【们】【拿】【来】【,】【使】【之】【成】【为】【同】【学】【们】【作】【文】【的】【最】【佳】【题】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朱】【自】【清】【的】【《】【背】【影】【》】【,】【一】【直】【是】【初】【中】【课】【本】【的】【保】【留】【篇】【目】【,】【感】【动】【过】【一】【代】【又】【一】【代】【读】【者】【,】【教】【育】【了】【一】【代】【又】【一】【代】【学】【子】【。】【然】【而】【,】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【语】【言】【极】【其】【质】【朴】【无】【华】【,】【何】【以】【这】【般】【感】【人】【至】【深】【?】【一】【个】【重】【要】【原】【因】【就】【是】【作】【者】【写】【的】【是】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【、】【亲】【身】【感】【受】【,】【人】【真】【事】【真】【,】【情】【真】【意】【真】【。】【每】【个】【人】【都】【有】【自】【己】【的】【家】【庭】【,】【家】【庭】【是】【同】【学】【们】【生】【活】【的】【摇】【篮】【。】【家】【庭】【里】【有】【我】【们】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【和】【事】【,】【有】【我】【们】【最】【受】【感】【动】【的】【材】【料】【。】【这】【儿】【有】【温】【馨】【,】【有】【和】【谐】【,】【有】【天】【下】【最】【博】【大】【深】【沉】【、】【最】【细】【腻】【真】【挚】【的】【亲】【情】【,】【父】【母】【之】【恩】【、】【祖】【孙】【之】【爱】【、】【手】【足】【之】【情】【…】【…】【但】【这】【里】【也】【不】【常】【是】【宁】【静】【的】【港】【湾】【,】【有】【时】【也】【会】【风】【波】【骤】【起】【,】【让】【人】【好】【生】【烦】【恼】【。】【其】【实】【,】【亲】【昵】【也】【罢】【,】【唠】【叨】【也】【罢】【,】【攀】【谈】【也】【罢】【,】【争】【执】【也】【罢】【,】【此】【间】【蕴】【涵】【的】【永】【远】【是】【人】【类】【最】【圣】【洁】【的】【情】【愫】【。】【还】【记】【否】【?】【那】【委】【屈】【后】【的】【一】【句】【慰】【藉】【,】【那】【挫】【折】【后】【的】【一】【次】【抚】【摸】【,】【不】【似】【那】【春】【风】【细】【雨】【滋】【润】【心】【头】【?】【无】【须】【惊】【讶】【,】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【可】【能】【是】【平】【凡】【的】【甚】【至】【是】【平】【淡】【的】【,】【家】【庭】【故】【事】【可】【能】【是】【单】【纯】【的】【甚】【至】【是】【单】【调】【的】【,】【但】【只】【要】【用】【心】【体】【会】【,】【努】【力】【挖】【掘】【出】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【某】【段】【不】【寻】【常】【的】【历】【程】【,】【或】【许】【记】【下】【亲】【人】【间】【的】【一】【个】【细】【小】【动】【作】【、】【一】【个】【细】【微】【情】【节】【、】【一】【个】【眼】【神】【、】【一】【种】【姿】【势】【,】【以】【此】【传】【达】【自】【己】【真】【真】【切】【切】【的】【亲】【情】【感】【受】【和】【对】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【的】【深】【刻】【理】【解】【,】【就】【会】【写】【出】【一】【个】【动】【人】【的】【家】【,】【让】【人】【震】【颤】【,】【让】【人】【共】【鸣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【材】【真】【实】【是】【文】【章】【的】【生】【命】【保】【证】【。】【那】【些】【胡】【编】【乱】【造】【的】【所】【谓】【“】【感】【人】【”】【故】【事】【,】【只】【会】【让】【读】【者】【反】【感】【。】【有】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【表】【明】【自】【己】【的】【“】【崇】【高】【”】【,】【文】【章】【始】【终】【不】【离】【“】【车】【上】【让】【座】【”】【、】【“】【捐】【钱】【救】【灾】【”】【“】【入】【水】【救】【人】【”】【等】【。】【我】【们】【希】【望】【社】【会】【充】【满】【关】【怀】【,】【充】【满】【和】【谐】【,】【可】【是】【我】【们】【不】【希】【望】【学】【生】【的】【文】【章】【里】【始】【终】【充】【满】【假】【话】【、】【充】【满】【谎】【言】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【不】【真】【读】【者】【无】【。】【选】【择】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【,】【固】【然】【要】【抛】【弃】【那】【些】【胡】【乱】【地】【编】【造】【故】【事】【、】【想】【当】【然】【地】【塑】【造】【人】【物】【以】【及】【无】【中】【生】【有】【地】【捏】【造】【感】【情】【的】【做】【法】【。】【然】【而】【,】【如】【果】【一】【味】【地】【直】【录】【生】【活】【,】【不】【作】【任】【何】【剪】【接】【加】【工】【,】【甚】【至】【把】【那】【些】【不】【成】【熟】【的】【感】【受】【、】【不】【健】【康】【的】【情】【调】【也】【带】【进】【文】【章】【中】【来】【,】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【只】【会】【黯】【然】【失】【色】【,】【何】【谈】【动】【人】【?】【这】【也】【正】【是】【下】【文】【要】【谈】【到】【的】【选】【材】【真】【实】【的】【又】【一】【方】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【:】【提】【炼】【典】【型】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【真】【实】【生】【活】【,】【就】【没】【有】【文】【章】【的】【源】【泉】【。】【没】【有】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【,】【文】【章】【就】【失】【去】【了】【感】【人】【的】【魅】【力】【,】【是】【谓】【“】【无】【假】【文】【章】【少】【”】【。】【“】【假】【”】【,】【不】【是】【选】【材】【上】【的】【“】【虚】【假】【”】【,】【而】【是】【艺】【术】【上】【的】【“】【虚】【构】【”】【,】【即】【在】【真】【实】【生】【活】【的】【基】【础】【上】【进】【行】【技】【巧】【性】【的】【加】【工】【,】【如】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【、】【修】【饰】【语】【言】【等】【。】【它】【摒】【弃】【作】【文】【中】【对】【生】【活】【原】【封】【不】【动】【的】【反】【映】【,】【力】【求】【化】【实】【为】【虚】【、】【由】【虚】【而】【实】【、】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【。】【一】【堆】【乱】【石】【荒】【草】【,】【本】【无】【多】【少】【美】【感】【,】【很】【有】【可】【能】【成】【为】【扫】【除】【的】【对】【象】【,】【但】【在】【画】【家】【笔】【下】【,】【却】【是】【一】【幅】【绝】【美】【的】【天】【然】【图】【画】【。】【这】【“】【图】【画】【”】【,】【是】【画】【家】【心】【之】【感】【悟】【,】【是】【一】【种】【艺】【术】【的】【真】【实】【。】【由】【“】【乱】【石】【荒】【草】【”】【到】【“】【图】【画】【”】【,】【有】【一】【个】【提】【炼】【加】【工】【的】【过】【程】【,】【这】【个】【过】【程】【就】【是】【由】【“】【真】【”】【到】【“】【假】【”】【、】【由】【“】【生】【活】【真】【实】【”】【到】【“】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【”】【。】【同】【样】【,】【作】【家】【在】【选】【材】【中】【也】【常】【循】【此】【规】【律】【,】【小】【到】【一】【句】【话】【,】【大】【至】【一】【个】【人】【物】【,】【都】【要】【作】【艺】【术】【处】【理】【,】【进】【行】【必】【要】【的】【“】【包】【装】【”】【。】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【在】【《】【阿】【Q】【正】【传】【》】【中】【,】【把】【现】【实】【生】【活】【里】【许】【多】【人】【相】【类】【似】【的】【性】【格】【浓】【缩】【并】【加】【以】【夸】【张】【,】【集】【中】【于】【阿】【Q】【这】【个】【人】【物】【身】【上】【,】【尽】【管】【阿】【Q】【这】【个】【人】【物】【在】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【是】【没】【有】【的】【,】【但】【他】【的】【性】【格】【却】【能】【在】【许】【多】【人】【身】【上】【找】【出】【来】【。】【这】【个】【放】【大】【的】【、】【包】【装】【了】【的】【阿】【Q】【性】【格】【,】【更】【典】【型】【、】【更】【集】【中】【地】【反】【映】【了】【人】【物】【的】【本】【质】【特】【征】【,】【从】【而】【成】【为】【文】【学】【史】【上】【的】【不】【朽】【形】【象】【。】【这】【里】【要】【告】【诉】【同】【学】【们】【,】【在】【作】【文】【中】【,】【无】【论】【是】【写】【人】【、】【叙】【事】【,】【还】【是】【状】【物】【,】【很】【需】【要】【豁】【达】【一】【点】【、】【变】【通】【一】【点】【、】【灵】【巧】【一】【点】【,】【既】【尊】【重】【生】【活】【又】【不】【拘】【泥】【于】【生】【活】【原】【色】【,】【方】【能】【使】【文】【章】【达】【到】【反】【映】【生】【活】【、】【服】【务】【生】【活】【并】【高】【于】【生】【活】【的】【目】【的】【。】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【,】【才】【更】【富】【有】【积】【极】【感】【人】【的】【魅】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【新】【颖】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【效】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【颖】【的】【材】【料】【,】【就】【是】【别】【人】【没】【有】【发】【现】【使】【用】【过】【的】【材】【料】【,】【抑】【或】【别】【人】【写】【过】【却】【还】【能】【从】【中】【写】【出】【新】【意】【的】【材】【料】【。】【材】【料】【新】【颖】【生】【动】【,】【写】【起】【来】【才】【能】【留】【有】【回】【味】【,】【读】【起】【来】【才】【能】【生】【动】【活】【泼】【。】【这】【样】【来】【选】【材】【,】【必】【能】【使】【作】【文】【产】【生】【令】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【之】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【生】【在】【选】【材】【过】【程】【中】【常】【有】【这】【样】【的】【困】【惑】【:】【自】【己】【与】【其】【他】【同】【学】【生】【活】【、】【处】【境】【没】【什】【么】【大】【差】【别】【,】【日】【子】【平】【淡】【得】【近】【乎】【于】【单】【调】【,】【能】【有】【什】【么】【新】【颖】【的】【素】【材】【呢】【?】【写】【同】【窗】【总】【难】【忘】【“】【半】【块】【橡】【皮】【”】【,】【写】【父】【母】【总】【牵】【扯】【到】【“】【一】【把】【雨】【伞】【”】【,】【写】【爱】【心】【总】【离】【不】【开】【“】【希】【望】【工】【程】【”】【。】【诸】【如】【此】【类】【,】【把】【生】【活】【生】【硬】【分】【割】【,】【使】【人】【读】【之】【生】【厌】【。】【特】【别】【是】【写】【老】【师】【,】【一】【些】【同】【学】【的】【习】【作】【在】【选】【材】【上】【常】【犯】【“】【公】【式】【化】【”】【的】【毛】【病】【,】【一】【般】【都】【写】【老】【师】【有】【一】【头】【被】【粉】【笔】【染】【白】【的】【头】【发】【,】【刻】【苦】【钻】【研】【的】【精】【神】【,】【辛】【勤】【备】【课】【、】【上】【课】【,】【认】【真】【批】【改】【作】【业】【,】【个】【别】【辅】【导】【,】【等】【等】【。】【不】【仅】【如】【此】【,】【许】【多】【学】【生】【的】【老】【师】【都】【有】【一】【个】【惊】【人】【的】【特】【点】【:】【爱】【生】【病】【。】【好】【像】【学】【生】【特】【别】【喜】【欢】【老】【师】【生】【病】【,】【如】【果】【老】【师】【不】【生】【病】【便】【没】【有】【题】【材】【可】【写】【了】【。】【这】【样】【写】【出】【来】【的】【老】【师】【千】【篇】【一】【律】【、】【千】【人】【一】【面】【,】【没】【有】【个】【性】【,】【使】【文】【章】【失】【去】【了】【生】【命】【力】【。】【出】【现】【这】【种】【情】【况】【的】【原】【因】【,】【在】【于】【同】【学】【们】【对】【老】【师】【缺】【乏】【深】【入】【细】【致】【的】【了】【解】【,】【缺】【少】【师】【生】【间】【的】【个】【性】【情】【缘】【,】【由】【于】【“】【眼】【中】【无】【师】【”】【和】【“】【胸】【中】【无】【师】【”】【,】【自】【然】【不】【会】【有】【“】【手】【中】【之】【师】【”】【,】【只】【好】【按】【头】【脑】【中】【固】【有】【的】【“】【老】【师】【模】【式】【”】【凭】【空】【编】【造】【故】【事】【。】【不】【错】【,】【老】【师】【有】【老】【师】【的】【共】【性】【,】【他】【们】【为】【人】【师】【表】【、】【呕】【心】【沥】【血】【、】【对】【学】【生】【关】【怀】【备】【至】【,】【但】【他】【们】【又】【有】【个】【性】【:】【有】【的】【老】【师】【温】【和】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【严】【谨】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【朋】【友】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【是】【长】【者】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【似】【一】【缕】【春】【风】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【一】【丝】【秋】【雨】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【像】【热】【情】【的】【路】【标】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【冷】【峻】【的】【航】【灯】【…】【…】【凡】【此】【种】【种】【,】【都】【是】【写】【作】【的】【极】【好】【素】【材】【,】【很】【可】【惜】【,】【这】【些】【个】【性】【化】【的】【老】【师】【,】【我】【们】【很】【多】【同】【学】【却】【没】【能】【留】【心】【。】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【在】【作】【文】【中】【写】【出】【新】【意】【,】【别】【具】【一】【格】【呢】【?】【用】【自】【己】【的】【慧】【眼】【去】【发】【现】【吧】【。】【其】【实】【生】【活】【中】【的】【美】【是】【无】【处】【不】【在】【的】【。】【有】【位】【学】【生】【独】【辟】【蹊】【径】【,】【从】【喜】【、】【怒】【、】【哀】【、】【乐】【四】【方】【面】【选】【取】【了】【四】【件】【事】【,】【展】【示】【了】【一】【位】【老】【师】【献】【身】【教】【育】【事】【业】【的】【精】【神】【风】【貌】【。】【这】【位】【老】【师】【为】【学】【生】【的】【主】【动】【改】【错】【而】【高】【兴】【,】【为】【发】【现】【学】【生】【晨】【练】【掉】【队】【而】【生】【气】【,】【为】【自】【己】【未】【能】【为】【老】【父】【送】【终】【而】【伤】【怀】【,】【为】【参】【加】【学】【生】【的】【毕】【业】【典】【礼】【而】【快】【乐】【。】【独】【特】【新】【颖】【的】【四】【件】【事】【,】【生】【动】【地】【描】【绘】【出】【这】【位】【老】【师】【的】【形】【象】【,】【从】【而】【开】【辟】【了】【选】【材】【的】【新】【天】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【颖】【的】【材】【料】【并】【不】【仅】【指】【那】【些】【新】【奇】【、】【新】【潮】【的】【事】【。】【选】【材】【新】【颖】【,】【不】【是】【要】【学】【生】【脱】【离】【生】【活】【,】【恰】【恰】【是】【要】【他】【们】【对】【生】【活】【予】【以】【观】【照】【,】【用】【心】【体】【会】【生】【活】【。】【大】【凡】【从】【生】【活】【环】【境】【中】【选】【取】【的】【具】【有】【个】【性】【特】【点】【的】【材】【料】【都】【是】【新】【颖】【的】【,】【这】【些】【材】【料】【必】【须】【是】【从】【学】【生】【的】【心】【灵】【里】【歌】【唱】【出】【来】【的】【。】【我】【们】【的】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【、】【学】【校】【生】【活】【、】【社】【会】【生】【活】【是】【那】【么】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【,】【只】【要】【学】【生】【能】【留】【心】【体】【验】【,】【笔】【触】【何】【愁】【不】【开】【阔】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【期】【待】【着】【中】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【中】【能】【自】【觉】【地】【遵】【循】【选】【材】【的】【可】【信】【度】【、】【准】【确】【度】【和】【有】【效】【度】【,】【能】【艺】【术】【地】【构】【建】【好】【自】【己】【的】【选】【材】【策】【略】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【黑】【暗】【的】【第】【一】【天】【,】【我】【要】【播】【放】【曾】【经】【收】【藏】【的】【所】【有】【卡】【带】【。】【在】【那】【个】【信】【息】【科】【技】【并】【不】【发】【达】【的】【年】【代】【,】【音】【乐】【只】【属】【于】【耳】【朵】【。】【小】【红】【莓】【用】【空】【灵】【的】【嗓】【音】【问】【候】【着】【“】【D】【o】【 】【y】【o】【u】【 】【r】【e】【m】【e】【m】【b】【e】【r】【?】【”】【你】【看】【不】【到】【身】【边】【的】【杂】【物】【,】【好】【像】【真】【的】【处】【于】【天】【堂】【不】【曾】【坠】【落】【尘】【间】【,】【记】【忆】【牵】【扯】【着】【你】【飞】【了】【起】【来】【。】【D】【y】【i】【n】【g】【 】【i】【n】【 】【t】【h】【e】【s】【u】【n】【—】【—】【最】【后】【沉】【寂】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【。】【把】【林】【肯】【公】【园】【的】【音】【乐】【开】【到】【最】【大】【声】【,】【急】【骤】【地】【拨】【动】【电】【吉】【他】【,】【琴】【弦】【压】【着】【重】【金】【属】【低】【沉】【地】【咆】【哮】【。】【以】【为】【失】【去】【了】【全】【世】【界】【,】【以】【为】【自】【己】【一】【无】【所】【有】【,】【但】【摇】【滚】【会】【给】【予】【你】【力】【量】【,】【音】【乐】【会】【让】【你】【充】【盈】【。】【如】【果】【刚】【巧】【窗】【外】【下】【起】【了】【雨】【,】【就】【换】【一】【张】【陈】【绮】【贞】【的】【卡】【带】【,】【那】【个】【爱】【穿】【水】【蓝】【色】【牛】【仔】【裤】【的】【长】【发】【女】【孩】【,】【抱】【着】【一】【把】【朱】【红】【色】【的】【民】【谣】【吉】【他】【在】【一】【束】【光】【下】【唱】【自】【己】【的】【故】【事】【。】【走】【过】【下】【雪】【的】【北】【京】【,】【飞】【到】【做】【梦】【的】【巴】【黎】【,】【春】【天】【的】【雨】【水】【勾】【着】【你】【的】【手】【指】【头】【,】【然】【后】【戴】【着】【耳】【机】【在】【木】【质】【地】【板】【上】【沉】【沉】【地】【睡】【去】【。】【平】【平】【凡】【凡】【地】【生】【活】【,】【轰】【轰】【烈】【烈】【追】【逐】【一】【个】【梦】【。】【在】【黑】【暗】【的】【第】【二】【天】【,】【去】【听】【自】【然】【的】【声】【音】【。】【穿】【过】【无】【尽】【的】【狂】【野】【,】【等】【风】【,】【等】【风】【拂】【过】【树】【叶】【,】【摩】【擦】【出】【沙】【沙】【的】【声】【响】【。】【躺】【在】【大】【片】【的】【草】【地】【上】【,】【阳】【光】【温】【柔】【地】【将】【我】【拥】【抱】【,】【野】【花】【低】【声】【地】【在】【耳】【边】【絮】【语】【。】【在】【我】【年】【幼】【的】【时】【光】【,】【经】【常】【赤】【着】【脚】【踩】【在】【泥】【土】【里】【,】【天】【空】【像】【一】【朵】【明】【媚】【的】【花】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【属】【于】【自】【己】【的】【年】【华】【。】【眼】【前】【似】【乎】【又】【出】【现】【了】【那】【片】【淡】【蓝】【色】【的】【天】【,】【天】【空】【中】【浮】【动】【着】【的】【云】【,】【还】【有】【校】【园】【里】【那】【棵】【古】【老】【的】【银】【杏】【树】【,】【一】【到】【秋】【天】【,】【金】【色】【的】【扇】【状】【树】【叶】【就】【那】【样】【纷】【纷】【扬】【扬】【地】【落】【下】【来】【,】【铺】【满】【了】【整】【个】【小】【道】【。】【我】【踏】【着】【初】【冬】【的】【乐】【章】【走】【进】【教】【室】【,】【将】【美】【好】【的】【形】【状】【压】【进】【记】【忆】【的】【收】【藏】【夹】【。】【我】【回】【想】【起】【南】【方】【小】【镇】【的】【雪】【景】【,】【那】【是】【为】【数】【不】【多】【的】【下】【雪】【天】【,】【在】【清】【晨】【前】【往】【学】【校】【的】【公】【车】【玻】【璃】【上】【画】【下】【日】【期】【和】【小】【脚】【印】【,】【还】【未】【抽】【芽】【的】【樱】【花】【树】【却】【像】【开】【出】【了】【沁】【人】【的】【白】【色】【樱】【花】【,】【落】【在】【手】【上】【的】【雪】【花】【还】【没】【看】【清】【几】【瓣】【就】【消】【融】【了】【。】【不】【小】【心】【打】【在】【班】【主】【任】【黑】【色】【线】【帽】【上】【的】【雪】【球】【,】【堆】【好】【后】【却】【没】【有】【胡】【萝】【卜】【做】【鼻】【子】【的】【雪】【人】【,】【被】【埋】【在】【雪】【地】【里】【忘】【记】【带】【走】【的】【红】【手】【套】【,】【都】【是】【我】【们】【一】【去】【不】【复】【返】【的】【青】【春】【。】【我】【每】【天】【回】【家】【的】【桥】【头】【,】【红】【色】【的】【晚】【霞】【摇】【碎】【在】【江】【面】【,】【桥】【上】【有】【个】【女】【生】【用】【力】【地】【将】【许】【愿】【瓶】【扔】【向】【江】【心】【。】【她】【留】【着】【长】【长】【的】【马】【尾】【,】【背】【着】【米】【白】【色】【的】【书】【包】【。】【她】【的】【背】【影】【被】【拉】【长】【,】【我】【看】【见】【她】【站】【着】【眺】【望】【直】【到】【寻】【不】【见】【瓶】【子】【的】【踪】【迹】【。】【当】【她】【转】【过】【身】【,】【带】【着】【满】【足】【的】【神】【情】【笑】【着】【朝】【我】【挥】【手】【时】【,】【我】【也】【笑】【着】【向】【过】【往】【挥】【别】【。】【夜】【该】【深】【了】【吧】【,】【夏】【天】【的】【夜】【晚】【,】【站】【在】【阳】【台】【上】【看】【星】【星】【发】【出】【清】【冷】【的】【光】【,】【认】【真】【地】【为】【每】【一】【颗】【星】【命】【名】【。】【长】【大】【后】【我】【们】【常】【常】【会】【忘】【了】【抬】【头】【看】【星】【星】【,】【一】【心】【只】【注】【视】【脚】【下】【的】【路】【。】【太】【喧】【闹】【的】【城】【市】【不】【适】【合】【看】【星】【星】【,】【因】【为】【人】【心】【不】【够】【安】【定】【。】【突】【然】【之】【间】【,】【世】【界】【宁】【静】【了】【,】【宁】【静】【到】【只】【听】【得】【到】【自】【己】【的】【心】【跳】【。】【黑】【暗】【中】【画】【面】【跳】【跃】【,】【连】【成】【了】【一】【部】【叫】【曾】【经】【的】【电】【影】【。】【在】【黑】【暗】【的】【第】【三】【天】【,】【给】【所】【有】【的】【亲】【友】【打】【一】【遍】【电】【话】【。】【话】【筒】【那】【头】【传】【来】【熟】【悉】【但】【却】【久】【违】【的】【声】【音】【。】【爸】【爸】【温】【和】【的】【嗓】【音】【聊】【着】【下】【午】【在】【旧】【书】【摊】【淘】【来】【的】【书】【,】【浅】【黄】【色】【的】【纸】【上】【还】【留】【有】【墨】【香】【。】【妈】【妈】【抱】【怨】【着】【好】【久】【不】【和】【家】【里】【联】【系】【,】【阳】【台】【上】【的】【黄】【玫】【瑰】【又】【开】【了】【,】【让】【人】【脑】【海】【中】【浮】【现】【出】【娇】【嫩】【的】【花】【苞】【吐】【着】【芬】【芳】【的】【景】【象】【。】【读】【研】【的】【哥】【哥】【俨】【然】【大】【人】【的】【口】【气】【教】【导】【着】【如】【何】【珍】【惜】【大】【学】【时】【光】【,】【切】【勿】【荒】【废】【大】【把】【的】【青】【春】【岁】【月】【。】【好】【友】【声】【泪】【俱】【下】【地】【诉】【说】【着】【一】【件】【一】【件】【委】【屈】【的】【小】【事】【,】【我】【慢】【慢】【地】【劝】【慰】【着】【,】【听】【到】【那】【头】【平】【稳】【的】【鼻】【息】【。】【想】【念】【在】【大】【洋】【彼】【岸】【的】【人】【,】【她】【居】【住】【在】【盛】【夏】【的】【阳】【光】【里】【,】【她】【还】【是】【爱】【笑】【,】【一】【笑】【起】【来】【眉】【眼】【里】【装】【满】【的】【愉】【悦】【像】【要】【溢】【出】【来】【。】【站】【在】【学】【校】【池】【塘】【边】【拿】【着】【早】【餐】【喂】【池】【子】【里】【的】【鱼】【,】【午】【休】【时】【靠】【在】【树】【下】【聊】【天】【,】【有】【时】【就】【那】【样】【浅】【浅】【地】【睡】【去】【,】【睡】【在】【悠】【扬】【的】【年】【少】【时】【光】【里】【。】【还】【要】【为】【曾】【经】【因】【无】【心】【莽】【撞】【触】【犯】【过】【的】【人】【真】【诚】【道】【歉】【,】【对】【不】【起】【,】【因】【为】【我】【的】【骄】【傲】【与】【偏】【执】【伤】【害】【了】【很】【多】【人】【。】【还】【要】【为】【曾】【经】【在】【苦】【痛】【边】【境】【伸】【出】【援】【手】【的】【人】【真】【心】【感】【谢】【,】【谢】【谢】【,】【即】【使】【你】【们】【明】【了】【我】【所】【有】【的】【不】【足】【,】【却】【依】【然】【选】【择】【站】【在】【我】【身】【边】【。】【双】【眼】【已】【经】【习】【惯】【了】【永】【不】【消】【失】【的】【黑】【暗】【,】【在】【疲】【惫】【中】【沉】【睡】【。】【不】【知】【过】【了】【多】【久】【,】【晨】【曦】【透】【过】【窗】【户】【爬】【上】【床】【沿】【打】【在】【眼】【帘】【。】【光】【明】【来】【了】【,】【而】【散】【乱】【在】【身】【边】【的】【电】【话】【证】【明】【着】【这】【一】【切】【并】【不】【是】【梦】【。】【我】【曾】【被】【赐】【予】【三】【天】【的】【黑】【暗】【,】【黑】【暗】【中】【我】【倾】【听】【了】【自】【然】【,】【倾】【听】【了】【亲】【友】【,】【倾】【听】【了】【回】【忆】【。】【浮】【华】【中】【我】【曾】【不】【断】【地】【探】【寻】【,】【求】【索】【。】【或】【许】【每】【个】【人】【都】【需】【要】【三】【天】【的】【黑】【暗】【,】【静】【下】【心】【去】【感】【受】【这】【个】【世】【界】【的】【跳】【动】【,】【听】【草】【的】【生】【长】【,】【听】【花】【的】【盛】【开】【,】【听】【心】【想】【要】【倾】【诉】【什】【么】【。】【然】【后】【睁】【开】【双】【眼】【坚】【定】【方】【向】【,】【前】【行】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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